Pickled Version 1

A kid discovers a dark secret about the old woman on his street.

When I pitched this version, it was much darker than what I had intended. So, I scrapped this script, and rewrote this as a lighter story. I still like aspects of this version though.

Transcript

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15. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: Are you nuts? Picked Head Page 15/101
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17. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: The lady that lives there is insane! Picked Head Page 17/101
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22. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil: What about the ball? Silas: We'll get a new one. Picked Head Page 22/101
23. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: Let's go. Picked Head Page 23/101
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30. Scene 10 Duration 06:01 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Kid: Boy, I love my coal mining job! Picked Head Page 30/101
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35. Scene 13 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Heather: Telegram for you, Lucille. Picked Head Page 35/101
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38. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Oh, ribbons on sale at Bloomingdale's. Picked Head Page 38/101
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43. Scene 16 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Hmm... Picked Head Page 43/101
44. Scene 17 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [coughing] Picked Head Page 44/101
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48. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Your husband's request was Picked Head Page 48/101
49. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: quite the challange for us, Picked Head Page 49/101
50. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: But we made it work. Picked Head Page 50/101
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53. Scene 21 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: [gasp] Picked Head Page 53/101
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56. Scene 24 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Levi... Picked Head Page 56/101
57. Scene 24 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Sobbing Picked Head Page 57/101
58. Scene 25 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Oh, dear. Picked Head Page 58/101
59. Scene 25 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Eustice, cover it up! Picked Head Page 59/101
60. Scene 25 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:[sobbing] Picked Head Page 60/101
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64. Scene 27 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: [sobbing] Picked Head Page 64/101
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67. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Goddang Eustice. Picked Head Page 67/101
68. Scene 30 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: [mutter, mutter] Picked Head Page 68/101
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72. Scene 32 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Oh, Mrs. Haas! Picked Head Page 72/101
73. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: I didn't know you were here. Picked Head Page 73/101
74. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Did Eustice let you in? Picked Head Page 74/101
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76. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Mrs. Haas? || Lucille: AH! Picked Head Page 76/101
77. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: So sorry, ma'am. So sorry. Picked Head Page 77/101
78. Scene 37 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: No, I am sorry. I have wandered in here like a spirit. My apologies. Picked Head Page 78/101
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82. Scene 39 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: You can take him home, if you'd like. Picked Head Page 82/101
83. Scene 40 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Really? Picked Head Page 83/101
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90. Scene 43 Duration 16:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: There. Picked Head Page 90/101
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93. Scene 43 Duration 16:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Doesn't he look great? || Heather: Sure! Picked Head Page 93/101
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