Comic Excerpt: 20-Panel Exercise

A 20-panel character exercise done for CDA's "Intro to Story Development" class with Max Perkins.
Characters and story are of my own design, based on a comic I have been developing.

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2. ( Ga s p s )
3. ( Mu f f l e d s h o u t i n g )
4. ( Mu f f l e d s h o u t i n g )
5. “ T h a n k g o d y o u ’ r e h e r e ! ” “ Wh a t . . h a p p e n e d ? ”
6. “ I d o n ’ t k n o w. . I j u s t - I wo k e u p a t t a c h e d t o t h i s t h i n g . . ”
7. “ . . B u t I k n e w y o u wo u l d c o me f o r me . ”
8. “ Y o u ’ r e a l wa y s t h e r e f o r y o u r f r i e n d s , c o me h e l l o r h i g h wa t e r . ”
9. “ I t ’ s g o n n a b e a l r i g h t n o w. Y o u ’ r e f r e e . ”
10. “ T h a n k y o u s o mu c h f o r c o mi n g t o f i n d me , Mo . ”“ I t ’ s f i n e . I ’ l l a l wa y s c o me t o s a v e my f r i e n d s . ”
11. “ N o , I me a n i t . . . ”
12. “ T h a n k y o u . ”
13. “ Wh a t - ”
14. “ V , y o u - ! ” “ I t o l d y o u . . ”
15. “ I k n e w y o u ’ d c o me f o r me . ”
16. “ Gr r . . ”
17. “ . . r r a A A GH ! ”
18. ( Ch u c k l e s ) “ S u r e , s t r u g g l e h a r d e r , h o n e y . . ”
19. “ . . I t o n l y f e e d s my b a b y mo r e ! ”
20. ( L a u g h i n g )