Tent Sale

A comedy sequence I boarded for Studio Smokescreen's animated short "Tent Sale".

Transcript

1. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 1 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY (O.S.) We couldn’t be happier to have you aboard as a sales ranger here at Camp-orium, Josh. Tent Sale Page 1/116
2. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 2 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY We couldn’t be happier to have you aboard as a sales ranger here at Camp-orium, Josh. Tent Sale Page 2/116
3. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 3 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY We couldn’t be happier to have you aboard as a sales ranger here at Camp-orium, Josh. Tent Sale Page 3/116
4. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 4 Duration 01:01 Dialog JOSH Glad to be here- Tent Sale Page 4/116
5. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 5 Duration 01:01 Dialog JOSH -WOAH! Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 5/116
6. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 6 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY Huh-hah! Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 6/116
7. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 7 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY Huh-hah! Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 7/116
8. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 8 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY This is what I do to get in the zone, Josh. Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 8/116
9. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 9 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY This is what I do to get in the zone, Josh. Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 9/116
10. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 10 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY Today we take no prisoners! Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 10/116
11. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 11 Duration 01:01 Dialog HILARY Today, we sell tents! Action Notes Pop from pose to pose. No in-betweens. Tent Sale Page 11/116
12. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 12 Duration 01:01 Action Notes Slowly get into this pose. Use in-betweens again. Tent Sale Page 12/116
13. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 13 Duration 01:01 Action Notes HILARY Naruto-runs out of shot. Tent Sale Page 13/116
14. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 14 Duration 01:01 Action Notes HILARY Naruto-runs out of shot. Tent Sale Page 14/116
15. Scene 1 Duration 15:15 Panel 15 Duration 01:01 Tent Sale Page 15/116
16. Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 16/116
17. Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 17/116
18. Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 18/116
19. Scene 2 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Show me whatcha got. Sell me a tent, Josh. Tent Sale Page 19/116
20. Scene 3 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 20/116
21. Scene 3 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Razzle Dazzle me. Action Notes HILARY moves her fingers dramatically. Tent Sale Page 21/116
22. Scene 3 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Razzle Dazzle me. Action Notes HILARY moves her fingers dramatically. Tent Sale Page 22/116
23. Scene 3 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 23/116
24. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 24/116
25. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 25/116
26. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes JOSH clears his throat nervously. Tent Sale Page 26/116
27. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH Oookay. So this is a tent... Tent Sale Page 27/116
28. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH It’s got flaps aplenty. Action Notes JOSH gently smacks the tent. Tent Sale Page 28/116
29. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH It’s got flaps aplenty. Action Notes JOSH gently smacks the tent. Tent Sale Page 29/116
30. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH It’s got flaps aplenty. Action Notes JOSH gently smacks the tent. Tent Sale Page 30/116
31. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH It’s got flaps aplenty. Action Notes JOSH gently smacks the tent. Tent Sale Page 31/116
32. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Gonna stop ya there. Tent Sale Page 32/116
33. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Gonna stop ya there. Tent Sale Page 33/116
34. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 34/116
35. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY These aren’t flaps. Tent Sale Page 35/116
36. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY These aren’t flaps. Tent Sale Page 36/116
37. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY This- Tent Sale Page 37/116
38. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY This- Tent Sale Page 38/116
39. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 39/116
40. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 40/116
41. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 41/116
42. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 42/116
43. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 43/116
44. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 44/116
45. Scene 5 Duration 12:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -is a weather proof, double-layer, rain-fly cresting, Tent Sale Page 45/116
46. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -what I like to call: the kingdom of comfort. Tent Sale Page 46/116
47. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -what I like to call: the kingdom of comfort. Tent Sale Page 47/116
48. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Beat. Tent Sale Page 48/116
49. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Let’s pivot. Tent Sale Page 49/116
50. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 50/116
51. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes HILARY fumbles with her hair. Tent Sale Page 51/116
52. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILLARY (new voice) Can I collapse this tent, pardner? Tent Sale Page 52/116
53. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH ... Are you a cowboy now? Tent Sale Page 53/116
54. Scene 8 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Tent Sale Page 54/116
55. Scene 8 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY I’m a new customer. Tent Sale Page 55/116
56. Scene 8 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY A man of the west who’s tired of sleeping under the stars- Tent Sale Page 56/116
57. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont. O/S) -with only a ten gallon hat for a roof, Tent Sale Page 57/116
58. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -with only a ten gallon hat for a roof, Tent Sale Page 58/116
59. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -with only a ten gallon hat for a roof, Tent Sale Page 59/116
60. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -with only a ten gallon hat for a roof, Tent Sale Page 60/116
61. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) -with only a ten gallon hat for a roof, Tent Sale Page 61/116
62. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) let’s roll with the punches, Josh. Tent Sale Page 62/116
63. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) let’s roll with the punches, Josh. Tent Sale Page 63/116
64. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY (cont.) let’s roll with the punches, Josh. Tent Sale Page 64/116
65. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 65/116
66. Scene 9 Duration 10:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 66/116
67. Scene 10 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILLARY (cowboy voice) So, can I collapse this here tent? Tent Sale Page 67/116
68. Scene 10 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH You bet your... saddle? Tent Sale Page 68/116
69. Scene 10 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH You bet your... saddle? Tent Sale Page 69/116
70. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Tent Sale Page 70/116
71. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Love the improv, good energy, keep going, Sales Ranger. Tent Sale Page 71/116
72. Action Notes HILARY's hair strand falls back into original placement. Tent Sale Page 72/116
73. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Love the improv, good energy, keep going, Sales Ranger. Tent Sale Page 73/116
74. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Love the improv, good energy, keep going, Sales Ranger. Tent Sale Page 74/116
75. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Love the improv, good energy, keep going, Sales Ranger. Tent Sale Page 75/116
76. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH I mean, it practically collapses itself. Tent Sale Page 76/116
77. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH I mean, it practically collapses itself. Tent Sale Page 77/116
78. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH All’s you have to do is... Tent Sale Page 78/116
79. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH All’s you have to do is... Tent Sale Page 79/116
80. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH All’s you have to do is... Tent Sale Page 80/116
81. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH (cont.) Just... take these bendy sticks-- Tent Sale Page 81/116
82. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH (cont.) Just... take these bendy sticks-- Tent Sale Page 82/116
83. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH (cont.) Just... take these bendy sticks-- Tent Sale Page 83/116
84. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH (cont.) Just... take these bendy sticks-- Tent Sale Page 84/116
85. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH (cont.) Just... take these bendy sticks-- Tent Sale Page 85/116
86. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 86/116
87. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Anti-rust fiberglass tent poles. Tent Sale Page 87/116
88. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog HILARY Anti-rust fiberglass tent poles. Tent Sale Page 88/116
89. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 89/116
90. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 90/116
91. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 91/116
92. Scene 13 Duration 12:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 92/116
93. Scene 14 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 93/116
94. Scene 14 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 94/116
95. Scene 14 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 95/116
96. Scene 14 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 96/116
97. Scene 14 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 97/116
98. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 98/116
99. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 99/116
100. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 100/116
101. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 101/116
102. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 102/116
103. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH No blood. Tent Sale Page 103/116
104. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH Just the sentence I was hoping to say on my first day. Tent Sale Page 104/116
105. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 105/116
106. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Tent starts rumbling. Tent Sale Page 106/116
107. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 107/116
108. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 108/116
109. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 109/116
110. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 13 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 110/116
111. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 14 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 111/116
112. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 15 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 112/116
113. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 16 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 113/116
114. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 17 Duration 01:00 Tent Sale Page 114/116
115. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 18 Duration 01:00 Action Notes Beat Tent Sale Page 115/116
116. Scene 15 Duration 19:00 Panel 19 Duration 01:00 Dialog JOSH As I said. It collapses itself. Tent Sale Page 116/116