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Carmilla WIP

Aether
August 28, 2021
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Carmilla WIP

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Transcript

  1. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me

  2. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog DAD (V.O.) You say it

    right now Laura, or I'm not hanging up the phone. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 1/112

  3. Scene 1 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA Are you serious, Dad?

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 2/112

  4. Scene 1 Panel 3 Dialog LAURA Please don't do this

    right now - Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 3/112

  5. Scene 1 Panel 4 Action Notes She looks at the

    crowd behind her. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 4/112

  6. Scene 1 Panel 5 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Say it. I

    love you, Dad. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 5/112

  7. Scene 1 Panel 6 Dialog DAD (V.O.) (CONT'D) Wo ai

    ni, Baba. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 6/112

  8. Scene 1 Panel 7 Dialog Laura groans. Carmilla - Sincerely,

    Me Page 7/112

  9. Scene 1 Panel 8 Action Notes Pause for embarrassment Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 8/112

  10. Scene 1 Panel 9 Dialog LAURA (loudly) Fine, Dad! I

    love you! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 9/112

  11. Scene 1 Panel 10 Action Notes The crowd cheers. Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 10/112

  12. Scene 1 Panel 11 Action Notes The crowd cheers. Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 11/112

  13. Scene 1 Panel 12 Dialog DAD (V.O.) I love you

    too, sweetheart. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 12/112

  14. Scene 1 Panel 13 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Have fun in

    class. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 13/112

  15. Scene 1 Panel 14 Dialog LAURA Yeah... fun in class.

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 14/112

  16. Scene 1 Panel 15 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Oh, I just

    remembered - Uncle Ji is having a get together upstate, so we're driving up. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 15/112

  17. Scene 1 Panel 16 Dialog Your mother and I thought

    we might stop over at the school on our way up and say hi. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 16/112

  18. Scene 1 Panel 17 Dialog DAD (V.O.) (CONT'D) Anyway ,

    see you in a week, princess! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 17/112

  19. Scene 1 Panel 18 Action Notes Laura hangs up the

    phone. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 18/112

  20. Scene 1 Panel 19 Action Notes she sprints full speed

    towards her room. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 19/112

  21. Scene 1 Panel 20 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 20/112

  22. Scene 2 Panel 1 Action Notes A sleeping CARMILLA slumps

    quietly in the corner, unconsciously avoiding the beams of searing sunlight pouring through the slightly parted curtains. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 21/112

  23. Scene 2 Panel 2 Action Notes The soft paddle of

    bunny slippers echoes down an unseen hall, and Carmilla breaks into a satisfied dreamy smile. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 22/112

  24. Scene 3 Panel 1 Action Notes SMASH LAURA runs in

    guns blazing, with terrible news. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 23/112

  25. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA Carmilla! Carmilla, my parents

    are coming! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 24/112

  26. Scene 3 Panel 3 Dialog LAURA Carmilla! Carmilla, my parents

    are coming! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 25/112

  27. Scene 4 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 26/112

  28. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA (CONT'D) I'm going back

    to sleep. It's the middle of the day. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 27/112

  29. Scene 5 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 28/112

  30. Scene 5 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 29/112

  31. Scene 5 Panel 3 Action Notes Laura drags the sheets

    off of Carmilla. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 30/112

  32. Scene 5 Panel 4 Action Notes She recoils from the

    cold. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 31/112

  33. Scene 6 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 32/112

  34. Scene 6 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 33/112

  35. Scene 6 Panel 3 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 34/112

  36. Scene 7 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA This is serious Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 35/112

  37. Scene 7 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 36/112

  38. Scene 8 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 37/112

  39. Scene 8 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA This is serious Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 38/112

  40. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA , Milly. Carmilla -

    Sincerely, Me Page 39/112

  41. Scene 9 Panel 2 Action Notes Laura paces around the

    room. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 40/112

  42. Scene 9 Panel 3 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 41/112

  43. Scene 9 Panel 4 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 42/112

  44. Scene 10 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 43/112

  45. Scene 10 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 44/112

  46. Scene 10 Panel 3 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 45/112

  47. Scene 10 Panel 4 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 46/112

  48. Scene 11 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 47/112

  49. Scene 11 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 48/112

  50. Scene 11 Panel 3 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 49/112

  51. Scene 11 Panel 4 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 50/112

  52. Scene 11 Panel 5 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 51/112

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  59. Scene 11 Panel 12 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 58/112

  60. Scene 11 Panel 13 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 59/112

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  62. Scene 11 Panel 15 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 61/112

  63. Scene 11 Panel 16 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 62/112

  64. Scene 11 Panel 17 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 63/112

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  67. Scene 11 Panel 20 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 66/112

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  74. Scene 11 Panel 27 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 73/112

  75. Scene 11 Panel 28 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 74/112

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  79. Scene 11 Panel 32 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 78/112

  80. Scene 11 Panel 33 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 79/112

  81. Scene 11 Panel 34 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 80/112

  82. Scene 13 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 81/112

  83. Scene 13 Panel 2 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 82/112

  84. Scene 13 Panel 3 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 83/112

  85. Scene 14 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 84/112

  86. Scene 14 Panel 2 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 85/112

  87. Scene 14 Panel 3 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 86/112

  88. Scene 14 Panel 4 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 87/112

  89. Scene 14 Panel 5 Dialog CARMILLA (CONT'D) DEAR CARMILLA, WE'VE

    BEEN WAY TOO OUT OF TOUCH Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 88/112

  90. Scene 14 Panel 6 Dialog THINGS HAVE BEEN CRAZY AND

    IT SUCKS THAT WE DON'T TALK THAT MUCH Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 89/112

  91. Scene 14 Panel 7 Dialog BUT I SHOULD TELL YOU

    THAT I THINK OF YOU EACH NIGHT Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 90/112

  92. Scene 14 Panel 8 Dialog I RUB MY NIPPLES -

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 91/112

  93. Scene 14 Panel 9 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 92/112

  94. Scene 14 Panel 10 Dialog LAURA Why would you write

    that?! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 93/112

  95. Scene 14 Panel 11 Dialog CARMILLA I'm just trying to

    tell the truth. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 94/112

  96. Scene 14 Panel 12 Dialog LAURA This needs to be

    perfect. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 95/112

  97. Scene 14 Panel 13 Dialog These letters have to prove

    that we were actually friends. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 96/112

  98. Scene 14 Panel 14 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 97/112

  99. Scene 14 Panel 15 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 98/112

  100. Scene 14 Panel 16 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 99/112

  101. Scene 15 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 100/112

  102. Scene 16 Panel 1 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 101/112

  103. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA I'VE GOTTA TELL YOU

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 102/112

  104. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog , LIFE WITHOUT YA HAS

    BEEN Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 103/112

  105. Scene 17 Panel 3 Dialog HARD Carmilla - Sincerely, Me

    Page 104/112

  106. Scene 17 Panel 4 Dialog CARMILLA Hard? Carmilla - Sincerely,

    Me Page 105/112

  107. Scene 17 Panel 5 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 106/112

  108. Scene 17 Panel 6 Dialog CARMILLA Bad? Carmilla - Sincerely,

    Me Page 107/112

  109. Scene 17 Panel 7 Dialog LAURA HAS BEEN ROUGH Carmilla

    - Sincerely, Me Page 108/112

  110. Scene 17 Panel 8 Dialog CARMILLA Kinky! Carmilla - Sincerely,

    Me Page 109/112

  111. Scene 17 Panel 9 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 110/112

  112. Scene 17 Panel 10 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 111/112

  113. Scene 17 Panel 11 Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 112/112