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Carmilla WIP

Aether
August 28, 2021

Carmilla WIP

Aether

August 28, 2021
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  1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog DAD (V.O.) You say it

    right now Laura, or I'm not hanging up the phone. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 1/112
  2. Scene 1 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA Are you serious, Dad?

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 2/112
  3. Scene 1 Panel 3 Dialog LAURA Please don't do this

    right now - Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 3/112
  4. Scene 1 Panel 4 Action Notes She looks at the

    crowd behind her. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 4/112
  5. Scene 1 Panel 5 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Say it. I

    love you, Dad. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 5/112
  6. Scene 1 Panel 6 Dialog DAD (V.O.) (CONT'D) Wo ai

    ni, Baba. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 6/112
  7. Scene 1 Panel 9 Dialog LAURA (loudly) Fine, Dad! I

    love you! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 9/112
  8. Scene 1 Panel 12 Dialog DAD (V.O.) I love you

    too, sweetheart. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 12/112
  9. Scene 1 Panel 13 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Have fun in

    class. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 13/112
  10. Scene 1 Panel 14 Dialog LAURA Yeah... fun in class.

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 14/112
  11. Scene 1 Panel 15 Dialog DAD (V.O.) Oh, I just

    remembered - Uncle Ji is having a get together upstate, so we're driving up. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 15/112
  12. Scene 1 Panel 16 Dialog Your mother and I thought

    we might stop over at the school on our way up and say hi. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 16/112
  13. Scene 1 Panel 17 Dialog DAD (V.O.) (CONT'D) Anyway ,

    see you in a week, princess! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 17/112
  14. Scene 1 Panel 18 Action Notes Laura hangs up the

    phone. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 18/112
  15. Scene 1 Panel 19 Action Notes she sprints full speed

    towards her room. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 19/112
  16. Scene 2 Panel 1 Action Notes A sleeping CARMILLA slumps

    quietly in the corner, unconsciously avoiding the beams of searing sunlight pouring through the slightly parted curtains. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 21/112
  17. Scene 2 Panel 2 Action Notes The soft paddle of

    bunny slippers echoes down an unseen hall, and Carmilla breaks into a satisfied dreamy smile. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 22/112
  18. Scene 3 Panel 1 Action Notes SMASH LAURA runs in

    guns blazing, with terrible news. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 23/112
  19. Scene 3 Panel 2 Dialog LAURA Carmilla! Carmilla, my parents

    are coming! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 24/112
  20. Scene 3 Panel 3 Dialog LAURA Carmilla! Carmilla, my parents

    are coming! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 25/112
  21. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog CARMILLA (CONT'D) I'm going back

    to sleep. It's the middle of the day. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 27/112
  22. Scene 5 Panel 3 Action Notes Laura drags the sheets

    off of Carmilla. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 30/112
  23. Scene 5 Panel 4 Action Notes She recoils from the

    cold. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 31/112
  24. Scene 9 Panel 2 Action Notes Laura paces around the

    room. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 40/112
  25. Scene 14 Panel 2 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 85/112
  26. Scene 14 Panel 3 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 86/112
  27. Scene 14 Panel 4 Action Notes She pulls out Laura's

    laptop and starts typing. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 87/112
  28. Scene 14 Panel 5 Dialog CARMILLA (CONT'D) DEAR CARMILLA, WE'VE

    BEEN WAY TOO OUT OF TOUCH Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 88/112
  29. Scene 14 Panel 6 Dialog THINGS HAVE BEEN CRAZY AND

    IT SUCKS THAT WE DON'T TALK THAT MUCH Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 89/112
  30. Scene 14 Panel 7 Dialog BUT I SHOULD TELL YOU

    THAT I THINK OF YOU EACH NIGHT Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 90/112
  31. Scene 14 Panel 8 Dialog I RUB MY NIPPLES -

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 91/112
  32. Scene 14 Panel 10 Dialog LAURA Why would you write

    that?! Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 93/112
  33. Scene 14 Panel 11 Dialog CARMILLA I'm just trying to

    tell the truth. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 94/112
  34. Scene 14 Panel 12 Dialog LAURA This needs to be

    perfect. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 95/112
  35. Scene 14 Panel 13 Dialog These letters have to prove

    that we were actually friends. Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 96/112
  36. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog LAURA I'VE GOTTA TELL YOU

    Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 102/112
  37. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog , LIFE WITHOUT YA HAS

    BEEN Carmilla - Sincerely, Me Page 103/112