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Sewer Stuck

Sewer Stuck

This was an old test from Big City Greens back in 2018. I had to come up with everything but it was based off the prompt "2-3 kids ages 9-12 in the city doing something"

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Jen Begeman
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April 18, 2022
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  2. Scene 1 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

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  3. Scene 2 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    This line is taking forever! BigCityGreens Test Page 2/139
  4. Scene 2 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    This line is taking forever! BigCityGreens Test Page 3/139
  5. Scene 2 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    This line is taking forever! BigCityGreens Test Page 4/139
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  7. Scene 2 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Lets go cut the line! BigCityGreens Test Page 6/139
  8. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Benji! BigCityGreens Test Page 8/139
  9. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    ETHEL pulls BENJI back BigCityGreens Test Page 9/139
  10. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Herd of tourists pass by BigCityGreens Test Page 10/139
  11. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Herd of tourists pass by BigCityGreens Test Page 11/139
  12. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Try some patience, will you? We're nearly there. BENJI: Ethel, its not gonna matter if they close first. BigCityGreens Test Page 12/139
  13. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Sigh. You've got a point. BigCityGreens Test Page 13/139
  14. Scene 3 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    I just wanted to see the top of the tower BigCityGreens Test Page 14/139
  15. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    It's the whole reason I wanted to go on this trip. BigCityGreens Test Page 15/139
  16. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    I wanna see the whole city from up there! BigCityGreens Test Page 16/139
  17. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Which is why we gotta cut the line! BigCityGreens Test Page 17/139
  18. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI stars to run offscreen but ETHEL pulls her back BigCityGreens Test Page 18/139
  19. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    We're not cutting in line. Not with all these people. BigCityGreens Test Page 19/139
  20. Scene 4 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    I'm surprised you're so excited for this though. It doesn't seem your speed. BigCityGreens Test Page 21/139
  21. Scene 5 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    I wanna hock a loogie off the top BigCityGreens Test Page 22/139
  22. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Ew. BigCityGreens Test Page 24/139
  23. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    AH! BigCityGreens Test Page 25/139
  24. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls camera out of pocket BigCityGreens Test Page 27/139
  25. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI snaps photo, ETHEL grabs bag BigCityGreens Test Page 28/139
  26. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Don't do that BigCityGreens Test Page 29/139
  27. Scene 7 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BAG floats over to sewer grate and then upwards BigCityGreens Test Page 31/139
  28. Scene 8 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    What's that smell? BigCityGreens Test Page 32/139
  29. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Our ticket outta here! BigCityGreens Test Page 34/139
  30. Scene 9 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pushes open sewer grate. ETHEL kneels. BigCityGreens Test Page 36/139
  31. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Sewer cover gets pushed off BigCityGreens Test Page 37/139
  32. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI and ETHEL look into sewer BigCityGreens Test Page 38/139
  33. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    I'm not going down there. It smells rank. BigCityGreens Test Page 39/139
  34. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Come on, we can sneak right up to the front of the line. BigCityGreens Test Page 41/139
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  37. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Ladies first! BigCityGreens Test Page 45/139
  38. Scene 10 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Ladies first! BigCityGreens Test Page 46/139
  39. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI lands BigCityGreens Test Page 47/139
  40. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI lands BigCityGreens Test Page 48/139
  41. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Are you coming or what? BigCityGreens Test Page 49/139
  42. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Yeah I just- BigCityGreens Test Page 51/139
  43. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    AH! BigCityGreens Test Page 52/139
  44. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI grabs camera from pocket BigCityGreens Test Page 54/139
  45. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    ETHEL pops out of water. BENJI snaps photo. BigCityGreens Test Page 55/139
  46. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Would you stop that? BENJI: We're making memories! BigCityGreens Test Page 56/139
  47. Scene 11 Duration 09:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Now lets get movin! ETHEL: How do you know which way to go? BigCityGreens Test Page 58/139
  48. Scene 12 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    That's what the rats are doing! BigCityGreens Test Page 60/139
  49. Scene 13 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    You think we should be following the rats? BigCityGreens Test Page 62/139
  50. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Who knows this place better? BigCityGreens Test Page 64/139
  51. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Who knows this place better? BigCityGreens Test Page 66/139
  52. Scene 15 Duration 04:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    This little guy is a scholar of the sewer! BigCityGreens Test Page 68/139
  53. Scene 15 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    RAT bites BENJI BigCityGreens Test Page 70/139
  54. Scene 15 Duration 04:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    AH BigCityGreens Test Page 71/139
  55. Scene 15 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    AH BigCityGreens Test Page 73/139
  56. Scene 16 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    RAT drops and runs offsreen (foreground) BigCityGreens Test Page 75/139
  57. Scene 16 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    RAT drops and runs offsreen (foreground) BigCityGreens Test Page 76/139
  58. Scene 16 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    RAT drops and runs offsreen (foreground) BigCityGreens Test Page 77/139
  59. Scene 16 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    You sure about them? BigCityGreens Test Page 78/139
  60. Scene 16 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog BOTH:

    Woah! BigCityGreens Test Page 80/139
  61. Scene 17 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Cool! BigCityGreens Test Page 82/139
  62. Scene 17 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Cool! BigCityGreens Test Page 84/139
  63. Scene 17 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Not cool! BigCityGreens Test Page 86/139
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  66. Scene 19 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    WAY cool! BigCityGreens Test Page 90/139
  67. Scene 19 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Benji no! BigCityGreens Test Page 91/139
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  69. Scene 21 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    RATS hiss BigCityGreens Test Page 93/139
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  75. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    YEAH! Woohoo! BigCityGreens Test Page 99/139
  76. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    EEEK! BENJI: Thats the spirit, Ethel! BigCityGreens Test Page 101/139
  77. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Rats bump up and down BigCityGreens Test Page 103/139
  78. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    Rats bump up and down BigCityGreens Test Page 104/139
  79. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI slams into ladder1 BigCityGreens Test Page 105/139
  80. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI's arms and legs drop BigCityGreens Test Page 106/139
  81. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI falls BigCityGreens Test Page 107/139
  82. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI'S eyes pop back BigCityGreens Test Page 108/139
  83. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    Are you okay? BigCityGreens Test Page 109/139
  84. Scene 24 Duration 10:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    I am now! BigCityGreens Test Page 111/139
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  87. Scene 26 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BOTH pop up, sewer gas spills out BigCityGreens Test Page 114/139
  88. Scene 26 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Boy it stinks down there. BigCityGreens Test Page 115/139
  89. Scene 26 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Glad we're there though! BigCityGreens Test Page 117/139
  90. Scene 26 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    No no no! BigCityGreens Test Page 119/139
  91. Scene 26 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    No no no! BigCityGreens Test Page 120/139
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  94. Scene 28 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    Looks like we just missed it. ETHEL: This sucks. I wanted to see the whole city and all i've seen are the sewers. BigCityGreens Test Page 123/139
  95. Scene 28 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls herself up. ETHEL drops her dead on the concrete. BigCityGreens Test Page 124/139
  96. Scene 28 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls herself up. ETHEL drops her dead on the concrete. BigCityGreens Test Page 125/139
  97. Scene 28 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls herself up. ETHEL drops her dead on the concrete. BigCityGreens Test Page 126/139
  98. Scene 28 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls herself up. ETHEL drops her dead on the concrete. BigCityGreens Test Page 127/139
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  100. Scene 30 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Action Notes

    BENJI pulls herself up. ETHEL drops her dead on the concrete. BigCityGreens Test Page 129/139
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  105. Scene 32.5 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog ETHEL:

    This is so much cooler. BigCityGreens Test Page 134/139
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  107. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog BENJI:

    This calls for a picture! ETHEL: Benji, stop moving! BigCityGreens Test Page 136/139
  108. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SCREAMING]

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