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Oh No!

Oh No!

Dean Outschoorn

March 14, 2023
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    BACK ON: TURRET and SCOOP who shake their heads as they watch the guys fight like 5 year olds in a sandbox. Scene 1 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes someting catches their eye os. Scene 2 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide Scoop and Turret turn as JUMBO NINJA and LILY approach. Location Scene 2 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Louis enters frame toward end of scene and is a bit woozy and stumbly and his face is a sickly-green. Scene 3 Duration 25:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Lily and Jumbo Ninja are about to enter frame Notes SFX <FOOTSTEPS> Scene 3 Duration 25:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Lily enters frame Scene 3 Duration 25:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 87 LILY 87 I?ve got treats! Action Notes LILY carries a giant pile of treats: cotton candy, popcorn, taffy, etc. LOUIS walks slowly and woozily behind them, his face a 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 1/21
  2. greenish hue. Scene 3 Duration 25:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00

    Dialogue 88 LOUIS 88 Ugh... Action Notes Jumbo Ninja settles Truck over to Louis Scene 3 Duration 25:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 88 LOUIS 88 I?ve got barf bagss Action Notes LOUIS holds up two very full barf bags. Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 89 TURRET 89 We need your help. The guys-- Action Notes CUT Close on Turren and Scoop Scene 4 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 89 TURRET 89 --are- Action Notes Turret is cut off because something catches the her and Scoop's attention off screen from above and behind the boys. They look up to see. Scene 5 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT wide. Ladyling is dropping in from off screen behind Lily, Louis and Jumbo Ninja Locations 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 2/21
  3. Scene 5 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    LADYLING lands and aims the perfume at LOUIS and JUMBO NINJA and <SPRAYS> Scene 5 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue SFX <SPRAY) Action Notes As Jumbo Ninja and Louis turn to see what's behind them Ladyling sprays hem with her perfume . Lily takes a step or two back to group in with Turret and Scoop Scene 5 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes The smoke quickly becomes opaque and covers the boys. Scene 6 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT on a opaque cloud of perfume smoke that fills the screen. It begins the dissipate. Scene 7 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue SFX <COUGH> Action Notes As the smoke clears we see Jumbo Ninja and Louis coughing and rubbing their eyes. Scene 7 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes When finished coughing and rubbing, they do a little take and look at ladyling Scene 8 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Boys P.O.V. On back of ladyling. She is bathed in a soft spotlight. Notes SOFT FOCUS 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 3/21
  4. Scene 8 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Ladyling turns and whips her hair in slow-mo Slow truck in for duratin of scene. Notes Dream Weaver type music. Scene 8 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Ladyling finishes whipping her hair around Slow truck in for duratin of scene Scene 9 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 90 LOUIS 90 In looooove... Action Notes BACK ON JUMBO AND LOUIS: They?re now smitten too! Scene 10 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide. The girls are, again, watching the boys fall head over heels for Ladyling. Ladyling is shaking her butt. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Close on the girls Scoop shakes her head in disapproval as in previous scene. Lily and Turret are in disbelief. Scene 11 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Lily also shakes her head disapproving. A frustrated TURRET smacks herself in the head with the mallet. Scene 12 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes ZIP PAN. Scene 13 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide ariel shot of Ladyling strutting around as the boys follow closely behind like love sick zombies clamouring for her attention. The girls are a bit further back watching. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 4/21
  5. Location Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action

    Notes CUT On Ladyling walking. Camera is tracking with Ladyling as she travels. Notes TRAVELING SHOT Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Jumbo Ninja and Louis zip into frame from either side and snuggle up beside Ladyling. Notes CAM CONTINUES TO TRAVEL Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Shakes and Nate zip into frame from either side. They are totally smitten and puppy dog-like with Ladyling. Their entrance knocks out Louis and Jumbo Ninja. Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Action Notes After getting bumped, Jumbo Ninja and Louis exit frame. Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 6 Duration 05:00 Action Notes All of a sudden, Nate starts to fall forward, and Jumbo ninja's ams come in from offscreen above and Grab Shake's shoulders. Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 7 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Shakes is pulled up of screen and nate falls out of frame. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 5/21
  6. Scene 14 Duration 40:00 Panel 8 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Jumbo Ninja cozies back up to Ladyling, and Louis pops up into frame making a kissy face. Scene 15 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 91 BRIIIAN 91 I have SWEET right where I want them! This plan can?t possibly fail! Muhhahahaha! Action Notes CUT On Briiian in the Concession stand loving his plan coming together. Scene 15 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 91 BRIIIAN 91 Tell them you don?t care who it is you just want that home cooked meal NOW! Action Notes Briiian now speaks into the mic directing Ladyling. Scene 16 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Boys follow behind ladyling like love-sick puppies, swooning over her. Notes Traveling shot. Location Scene 16 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes BG stops panning. Ladyling stops walking. Boys settle. Notes Cam stops when Ladyling stops. Scene 16 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes BG stops panning. Ladyling stops walking. Boys settle. Notes Cam stops when Ladyling stops. Scene 17 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide on Ladyling who has turned and stop walking. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 6/21
  7. Scene 17 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    She strikes a 'sexy pose' twirling her hair and talking 'gibbberish' Scene 18 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT BACK ON: The boys, who look at each other after hearing about the cooked meal. ...it's 'GAME ON' Scene 18 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 92 NATE/SHAKES/LOUIS 92 Dibs! Action Notes In unison the boys call 'dibs' on cooking for Ladyling. Scene 18 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue NATE rushes off. Seconds later, he slides in front of the LADYLING on his knees rock star-style, keytar in hand. Action Notes Nate zips off screen toward Ladyling. Scene 19 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide on Ladyling looking at the guys. Scene 19 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 93 NATE 93 Here?s a little something I wrote --- Action Notes NATE slides in front of the LADYLING on his knees rock star-style, keytar in hand. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 93 NATE 93 ---especially for you. Action Notes CUT. Over the shoulder of Ladyling. We see Nate on his knees.About to rock out. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 94 NATE 94 We?re like grains of sand, you and I...small, grainy and sandy apart. But together, a beautiful sight. Action Notes NATE plays an 80's metal ballad (think Whitesnake's "Here I Go Again") His hand sliding up and down wildly on the keytar. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 7/21
  8. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 95

    SHAKES (O.S.) 95 Pft! Lame! She needs a real man. Action Notes We hear Shakes from O.S. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 96 SHAKES 96 One who can knit a -- Action Notes SHAKES jumps in front of NATE,with his hands behind his back. Nate, still on his knees and covered by Shakes, peeks his head to see around Shakes. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 96 SHAKES 96 --cotton candy sweater! Action Notes SHAKES in front of NATE, holds up a pink sweater. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 6 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Large Shadow appears over Shakes and Nate. Jumbo ninja enters frame. Scene 20 Duration 35:00 Panel 7 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Jumbo Ninja jumps in front of Shakes and Nate, knocking them off screen. He fills most of the screen. He is juggling something. Scene 21 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide ON: The SWEET guys. Reveal Jumbo Nijnja is jugglig bouquets of flowers . Nate and Shakes settle on their butts after being bumped by J-Ninj ladyling stares blankly. Scene 21 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 8/21
  9. Scene 22 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    CUT Close on Ladylings blank expression. Scene 22 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 97 LOUIS 97 I scientifically proved why we?d be perfect together! -- Action Notes Louis pops out from behind Ladyling, parallel with the ground (cartoon logic) Scene 22 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 97 LOUIS 97 --My math doesn?t lie! Action Notes Louis holds up a paper with some forumulas on it. Scene 23 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 98 BRIIIAN 98 Argh! Just ask them for the address to their secret hideout... Action Notes CUT TO: BRIIIAN watching from the concession stand annoyed. Scene 23 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 98 BRIIIAN 98 --I mean their place... Action Notes He regains some composure and clarifies to Ladyling. Scene 24 Duration 25:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 99 LOUIS/SHAKES/NATE 99 Okay!... Action Notes CUT BACK ON: The SWEET guys. In unison they all begin to reveal the address of their hideout. Shakes and nate are finishing standing up and Louis is walking into frame. Jumbo Ninja holds his flower bouquets. Scene 24 Duration 25:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 99 LOUIS/SHAKES/NATE 99 It?s--- Action Notes Shakes and Nate stand up as Louis settles into position. They are about to reveal the location... 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 9/21
  10. Scene 24 Duration 25:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100

    BRAINLIUS III 100 NOOOOOOO! Action Notes Before they can finish, the EMPEROR zips in out of nowhere, knocking them out of frame. In the process, his mullet wig falls off. Scene 24 Duration 25:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100 BRAINLIUS III 100 Don?t you see? Action Notes Mullet continues to fall. Scene 24 Duration 25:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100 BRAINLIUS III 100 Don?t you see? Action Notes Mullet falls O.S. Scene 25 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100 BRAINLIUS III 100 You and I are destined to be together! I?ll make you the happiest woman... Scene 25 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100 BRAINLIUS III 100 err... female...err... Scene 25 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 100 BRAINLIUS III 100 ---thing on the planet! Scene 26 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 101 BRIIIAN 101 Oh--- Action Notes CUT TO: BRIIIAN smacking himself in the forehead. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 10/21
  11. Scene 26 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 101

    BRIIIAN 101 ---come on! Action Notes He lurches forward in disgust. Scene 27 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Over the shoulder from girls POV. Wide on Ladyling, boys and BRAINLIUS. TURRET, SCOOP and LILY, who had been watching on, see that it's Branlius without the mullet wig. Scene 28 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Reverse angle Medium on Girls. Turret finishes takes a lick of her icecream. Scene 28 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 102 TURRET 102 Emperor Brainlius the third? Here? Action Notes Turret puts her ice cream down a bit. The girls look at each other, confused. Scene 28 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 103 SCOOP 103 What?s going on? Scene 28 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes The girls train their focus back on the commotion in front of them. Scene 29 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT close on TURRET. She is squinting, gazing out at the boys and Brainlius Scene 29 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Suddenly, a look of realization washes over TURRET?s face. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 11/21
  12. Scene 30 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    CUT Close on the ice cream in turrets hand. Scene 30 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes The ice cream she?s been holding <TUMBLES> to the ground in slow motion, Scene 30 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes ice cream exits frame. Scene 31 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Extreme angle. Birds eye view of Turret as her ice cream falls to the ground. Scene 32 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Close on Turret's feet. Notes <SLOW-MO> Scene 32 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes ice cream drops from above entering frame. Notes <SLOW-MO> Scene 32 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Ice cream scoop <SPLAT> as cone bounces out. Notes <SLOW-MO> Scene 32 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Notes <SLOW-MO> 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 12/21
  13. Scene 33 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    CUT Close on Turret Slow truck in as she pieces the puzzle together. She stares off in the distance toward the Wack-a-Mole Stand. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 34 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Scene 35 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes SNAP Truck in.on the Wack A Mole stand. A few Brainlings are poking out. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 35 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes SNAP on on the Brainlings hiding inthe Wack a Mole holes. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 35 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes They duck down, hiding a bit mroe. Scene 36 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Close on Turret. (closer than previous shot where we see Turret Close up) Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 36 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Turret Shifts her gaze to a concessoin stand with prizes. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 37 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 13/21
  14. Scene 38 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Snap truck in on on a consessino stand. We stay close on the prizes which up close are obviously toy brainlings. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN Scene 39 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes ZIP pan. Scene 40 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. on some of the cardboard cutouts. Notes Slight TRACK left to right. Opposite angle tilt to previous scene. Scene 41 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Close on Turret. (closer than previous shot where we see Turret Close up) Notes SLOW TRUCK IN. Scene 41 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Turret shifts her gaze to the Concessin stand with Briiian. Notes SLOW TRUCK IN. Scene 42 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Wide on concession stand with Briian Scene 42 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes SNAP TRUCK IN. Scene 42 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CLOSE on Briian as he grimmaces toward the gang. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 14/21
  15. Scene 43 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Notes ZIP

    PAN. Scene 44 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Close on Turret. Notes DOLLY ZOOM? Scene 44 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes She has a 'lightbulb' moment. Realizing it is a trap. Notes STOP DOLLY ZOOM? Scene 44 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 104 TURRET 104 IT?S A TRAP!!! Scene 45 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 105 BRIIIAN 105 Well it was fun while it lasted. Scene 45 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 105 BRIIIAN 105 ALL BRAINLINGS ON DECK! Action Notes Briiian lurches forward and speaks into mic. Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. On cardboard cutouts. Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes little brainling amrs come up 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 15/21
  16. Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Brainling allyoops over cardboard cutout as a foot appears from behind the foreground cutout. Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Third braingling pushes cardboard cutout over Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Action Notes They all begin to run off screen Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 6 Duration 05:00 Action Notes The Run off screen. Scene 46 Duration 35:00 Panel 7 Duration 05:00 Action Notes All brainglings exit frame. Scene 47 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Close on the wack-a-mole. Brainglins peeking out. Scene 47 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes They hop out of their holes. The third brainling truggles a bit and 'rolls' out of his hole Scene 47 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes First two run out. Third Brainling lands and antics out. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 16/21
  17. Scene 47 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Third brainling runs out eyes closed mouth open. Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Medium on Merry go Round. Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Brainling 5 pops out. from behind a goat Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Brainling 6 and 7 pop out too Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes brainling 5 jumps from behind the goat Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Brainling 5 begins to run off the merry go round. Brainlings 6 and 7 also pop out from behind their hiding spots. Scene 48 Duration 30:00 Panel 6 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Brainling 5 almost clears the screen, B-6 jumps off merry go round. B7 starts running. Scene 49 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Top down long shot of the girls being swarmed by brainlings. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 17/21
  18. Loction Scene 49 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action

    Notes CUT. Top down long shot of the girls being swarmed by brainlings. Scene 50 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Low angle shot of the girls. Notes SFX <BRAINLING FOOTSTEPS> Scene 50 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Brainling's foot enters foreground. Notes SFX <BRAINLING FOOTSTEPS> Scene 50 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes First brainling settles as second brainling enters. Notes SFX <BRAINLING FOOTSTEPS> Scene 51 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. View from the concession stand where Briiian sits. We see the brainlings closing in on the girls. Scene 51 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 106 BRAINLIUS III 106 One cotton candy please! Action Notes The EMPEROR?s head pops up in the window. Blocking the view of the girls and brainlings. Scene 51 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 106 BRAINLIUS III 106 It?s for my girlfriend... 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 18/21
  19. Scene 52 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 107

    BRIIIAN 107 WE?RE SOLD OUT!!! Action Notes CUT angle on Briiian. He is frusterated. Scene 52 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 107 BRIIIAN 107 Brainlings ATTACK!!! Action Notes He looks around Brianlius and yells into the mic for the Brainlings to attck. Scene 53 Duration 15:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT ON Turret, LILY and SCOOP, who have panicked looks on their faces as the BRAINLINGS approach. Scene 53 Duration 15:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes All girls reach behind their backs. Scene 53 Duration 15:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes .Turret and Scoop pull out water Squirters. and Lily brings out a hammer. Scene 54 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT. Low angle shot of the girls wit the brainlings in the foreground. Scene 54 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes A foreground brainling rushes toward the girls. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Wide on the girls, frightened but ready. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 19/21
  20. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    As a brainling enters screen, lily lunges forwad with a mallet Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes LILY smacks <THWUMP> a BRAINLING with the mallet as she lands. Scoops and Turret are pleased. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Action Notes The force of teh impact sends the brainling off screen Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 5 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Turret and scopp share a look for a beat. lIly holds her pose. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 6 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Turret and Scopp jump forward, guns drawn. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 7 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 108 TURRET 108 It?s bath time Brainlings!! Action Notes Truck adjust as Turret and Scoop lands aiming the guns at Brainlings O.S. Lily looks O.S. left at more brainlings and smiles. Scene 55 Duration 40:00 Panel 8 Duration 05:00 Action Notes TURRET and SCOOP spray <PISH> them with a steady- albeit weakstream. Lily jumps of screen for more action, Mallet cocked. Scene 56 Duration 20:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT wide on a braingling as he's sprayed by a weak stream of water from the gun (PHISHSS) He is slightly annoyed 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 20/21
  21. Scene 56 Duration 20:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Action Notes

    Brainling stops coming forward and wipes his face annoyed. Scene 56 Duration 20:00 Panel 3 Duration 05:00 Action Notes Stream of water stops. Water doesn't have much effect. Brainling is very unimpressed and a bit wet. Scene 56 Duration 20:00 Panel 4 Duration 05:00 Scene 57 Duration 10:00 Panel 1 Duration 05:00 Action Notes CUT Close on Turret and Scoop. Scoop is looking at her gun unimpressed. Scene 57 Duration 10:00 Panel 2 Duration 05:00 Dialogue 109 SCOOP 109 This is slightly less powerful than I had hoped. 113B My Fair Ladyling Page 21/21