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The Great Phatsby Part 1

The Great Phatsby Part 1

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Gavin Freitas

March 15, 2023
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 119

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 120

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    He dodges a flurry of arrows from one
    bank,
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 121

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    a leaping wolf from the other.
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 122

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    He breathes a brief SIGH OF RELIEF,
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 123

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    but then looks up to see an angry moose
    glaring at him from a tree branch.
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 124

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    It leaps down at him as Smithers’ eyes
    widen in terror.
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 125

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    EXT. BURNS' SUMMER MANSION - DOCK -
    CONTINUOUS
    Mr. Burns is standing at the end of his
    dock, depressed and alone.
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 126

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  9. Scene
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    After a beat, Homer walks up.
    Dialogue
    HOMER
    Hey... Mr. Burns. Fun party. The
    firework was a huge hit.
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 127

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  10. Scene
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    (IMITATES A SINGLE LAME FIREWORK
    EXPLODING)
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    MR. BURNS
    Hush you! It was a disaster! Clearly I
    wouldn’t know a good time if--
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 128

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 129

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    MR. BURNS
    (SEES SOMETHING) Great Gatsby! What is
    that?!
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    He points across the bay, where a green
    light is reflected across the water.
    Above the light is a brightly-lit
    mansion. Sounds of LAUGHTER and MUSIC
    drift toward them.
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 130

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    HOMER
    Someone else is having a party... across
    the bay.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 131

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    MR. BURNS
    Once I would’ve thought nothing of
    rowing across the water and crashing
    that party. All doors would open for
    Monogram Monty. But that was a long
    time ago...
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 132

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    Burns slumps sadly. Homer takes pity on
    him.
    Dialogue
    HOMER
    I’ll row you over. How hard could it
    be?
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    EXT. BAY - A LITTLE LATER
    Burns sits in the back of the boat as
    Homer rows.
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 133

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    HOMER
    (GASPING FOR BREATH) So hard!
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 134

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    MR. BURNS
    Would it help if I whipped you?
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    HOMER
    Maybe. (THINKS) Yeah, a little.
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 135

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    Burns WHIPS Homer with a rope.
    ENERGIZED, he immediately starts rowing
    perfectly as they zip across the water.
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 136

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 137

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 138

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 139

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 140

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 141

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 142

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    EXT. BEACH - NIGHT
    Homer & Mr. Burns jump out of the boat
    and climb up a path:
    Dialogue
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 143

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 144

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    EXT. AMAZING MANSION - LAWN - CONTINUOUS
    Homer and Mr. Burns gaze in wonder at a
    fabulous party.
    Dialogue
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    The crowd is attractive, largely
    African-American and entirely dressed in
    white.
    Dialogue
    MR. BURNS
    (DELIGHTED) It's a white party! Just
    like I used to throw!
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 145

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    MR. BURNS
    (LOOKS AROUND) Although we interpreted
    the theme a bit differently in those
    days.
    Notes
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    INT. AMAZING MANSION - BALLROOM -
    CONTINUOUS
    Dialogue
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 146

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 147

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    Burns and Homer make their way through
    the party.
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    MR. BURNS
    Whoever is throwing this magnificent
    to-do understands how wealth and power
    should be enjoyed.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 148

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 149

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    Mr. Burns plunges into the crowd. (As
    they go, Homer grabs fancy passed apps
    and shoves them in his mouth.)
    Dialogue
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 150

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 151

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 152

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 153

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 154

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    MR. BURNS
    Tell me, where can I find our host?
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 155

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    FEMALE PARTYGOER #1
    I haven’t seen him.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 156

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    MALE PARTYGOER #1
    No one's ever seen him!
    Notes
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    FEMALE PARTYGOER #2
    He doesn't exist!
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 157

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    MALE PARTYGOER #2 ***#
    Oh, he's upstairs in his office.
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 158

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    INT. AMAZING MANSION - STAIRWAY -
    CONTINUOUS
    Mr. Burns and Homer head up a grand
    staircase. The walls are covered with
    gold records.
    Dialogue
    Notes
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 159

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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 160

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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 161

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  44. Scene
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    INT. MANSION - OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER
    Homer & Mr. Burns burst into a room
    Dialogue
    Notes
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    with a balcony overlooking the bay. A
    stout, 40ish BLACK MAN IN A WHITE SUIT,
    handsome & powerful, stares stoically
    out the window.
    Dialogue
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 162

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  45. Scene
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    MR. BURNS
    Are you the host of this incredible
    soiree? I must tell you, it’s the most
    incandescent, most dazzling--
    Notes
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    3
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    JAY G
    My name is Jay G.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 163

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    JAY G
    And nobody crashes my party.
    Notes
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    JAY G
    Not even you nobodies.
    Notes
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    Jay G SNAPS
    Dialogue
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 164

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    and GUARDS rush in wearing elegant white
    SWAT gear & point elegant white guns at
    Burns and Homer.
    Dialogue
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 165

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    HOMER
    (SCARED) Let’s go, Mr. Burns.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 166

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    Hearing this, Jay G's eyes narrow with
    deep intensity.
    Dialogue
    JAY G
    What did you just say?
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 167

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    HOMER
    Mr. Burns and I were just leaving.
    Notes
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 168

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    JAY G
    Are you Montgomery Burns, the despised
    billionaire?
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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 169

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    MR. BURNS
    (SCARED) That's what my cufflinks say.
    Notes
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    JAY G
    There’s something I’ve wanted to tell
    you for a long time, you ruthless
    monster...
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    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 170

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    MR. BURNS
    (SCARED NOISE)
    Notes
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    JAY G
    (INTENSE) I love you.
    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 171

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    Jay G gives Burns a huge bear hug.
    Dialogue
    MR. BURNS
    (BIGGER SCARED NOISE)
    Notes
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    MR. BURNS
    (BIGGER SCARED NOISE)
    Notes
    FADE OUT:
    END OF ACT ONE
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 172

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    Notes
    WABF04 "The Great Phatsby: Part One" ACT 1 Page 173

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