"Ride Fresh" Clickthrough

A rivalry between 2 subway graffiti artists that ends in unexpected friendship.

Story assignment from late 2019, finished in 2020.

Transcript

1. SFX OS: (subway trains whooshing by)
2. SFX OS: (subway trains whooshing by)
3. SFX OS: (subway trains whooshing by)
7. SFX OS: (Paint can spray)
8. SFX: (Paint can spray)
9. T: (Angrily groans)
13. SFX: (Spray noises)
14. SFX: (Spray noises)
15. SFX: (Spray noises)
16. SFX: (Wet splat!)
21. Y: Huh. You got spunk, kid. Tell you what.
22. Y: If you race me to the end of the tunnel, and WIN–
23. Y: –You get painting rights for the whole station.
24. Y: Sound good?
26. Y: Good.
27. Y: Then let’s start.
30. Y: Ready…
31. SFX OS: (Faint honk) Y: One…
32. Y: Two…
33. SFX: (Blaring train honk) T: Whoa!
35. T: Huh?
36. T: Hey!
71. Y: Nice moves, kid! I’m impressed.
78. SFX: (Loud metallic thud and crash)
79. SFX: (Loud metallic thud and crash)
87. Y: Ugh, darnit.
98. T: Hahahahaha!
99. T: Hahahahaha!
100. SFX: (Loud whooshing)
101. SFX: (Loud whooshing)
104. T: (Loud gasp)
112. Y: What the-?!
117. SFX: (Loud wooden snap)
122. Y: Man! That was a close one.
123. Y: You didn’t have to save my hide, but you did,
124. Y: You didn’t have to save my hide, but you did,
125. Y: And I–
126. T: (Low sniffling) Y: (OS) Aw, kid. I’m sorry.
127. Y: I’d feel the same if I was in your spot.
128. Y: It’s not much, but-
129. Y: It’s not much, but-
130. Y: -I think I know something that’ll cheer you up.
132. SFX: (Metal and wheels screeching)
134. SFX: (Paint spraying)
135. SFX: (Paint spraying)