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Mail Kid: The Water-Soaker | Storyboards

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June 04, 2021

Mail Kid: The Water-Soaker | Storyboards

2020

Storyboards for an original show idea by Max Paddock.

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Max Paddock

June 04, 2021
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  1. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker TV Comedy Age 7-15

  2. Scene 1 Panel 1 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 1/134 Max Paddock
  3. Scene 1 Panel 2 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 2/134 Max Paddock
  4. Scene 1 Panel 3 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 3/134 Max Paddock
  5. Scene 1 Panel 4 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 4/134 Max Paddock
  6. Scene 1 Panel 5 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 5/134 Max Paddock
  7. Scene 1 Panel 6 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 6/134 Max Paddock
  8. Scene 1 Panel 7 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 7/134 Max Paddock
  9. Scene 1 Panel 8 / 134 Action Notes David, riding

    on Mona, arrives at Lin's house. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 8/134 Max Paddock
  10. Scene 1 Panel 9 / 134 Action Notes David tip

    toes to the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 9/134 Max Paddock
  11. Scene 1 Panel 10 / 134 Action Notes David tip

    toes to the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 10/134 Max Paddock
  12. Scene 1 Panel 11 / 134 Action Notes David tip

    toes to the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 11/134 Max Paddock
  13. Scene 1 Panel 12 / 134 Action Notes David tip

    toes to the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 12/134 Max Paddock
  14. Scene 1 Panel 13 / 134 Action Notes David tip

    toes to the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 13/134 Max Paddock
  15. Scene 1 Panel 14 / 134 Action Notes David looks

    to Mona (off screen). Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 14/134 Max Paddock
  16. Scene 1 Panel 15 / 134 Dialog David: Shhhhhh.... Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 15/134 Max Paddock
  17. Scene 1 Panel 16 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  18. Scene 1 Panel 17 / 134 Action Notes David twirls

    in the air Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 17/134 Max Paddock
  19. Scene 1 Panel 18 / 134 Action Notes David twirls

    in the air Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 18/134 Max Paddock
  20. Scene 1 Panel 19 / 134 Action Notes David rings

    the doorbell Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 19/134 Max Paddock
  21. Scene 1 Panel 20 / 134 Action Notes David rings

    the doorbell Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 20/134 Max Paddock
  22. Scene 1 Panel 21 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  23. Scene 1 Panel 22 / 134 Action Notes David notices

    he still is holding the water soaker and Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 22/134 Max Paddock
  24. Scene 1 Panel 23 / 134 Action Notes David fumbles

    the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 23/134 Max Paddock
  25. Scene 1 Panel 24 / 134 Action Notes David fumbles

    the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 24/134 Max Paddock
  26. Scene 1 Panel 25 / 134 Action Notes David fumbles

    the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 25/134 Max Paddock
  27. Scene 1 Panel 26 / 134 Action Notes David catches

    the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 26/134 Max Paddock
  28. Scene 1 Panel 27 / 134 Action Notes And hides

    the water soaker behind his back Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 27/134 Max Paddock
  29. Scene 1 Panel 28 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  30. Scene 1 Panel 29 / 134 Dialog Lin(Off-Camera): Comin! Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 29/134 Max Paddock
  31. Scene 1 Panel 30 / 134 Dialog Lin: Yes? Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 30/134 Max Paddock
  32. Scene 1 Panel 31 / 134 Dialog Lin: Hello? Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 31/134 Max Paddock
  33. Scene 1 Panel 32 / 134 Dialog Lin: Oh no.

    Its you. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 32/134 Max Paddock
  34. Scene 1 Panel 33 / 134 Dialog David: Hey Lin!

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  35. Scene 1 Panel 34 / 134 Dialog David: Look what

    I got! Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 34/134 Max Paddock
  36. Scene 1 Panel 35 / 134 Dialog Lin: What do

    you- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 35/134 Max Paddock
  37. Scene 1 Panel 36 / 134 Action Notes David blasts

    Lin with the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 36/134 Max Paddock
  38. Scene 1 Panel 37 / 134 Dialog Lin: DAVID! Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 37/134 Max Paddock
  39. Scene 1 Panel 38 / 134 Dialog Lin: Why would

    you do that! Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 38/134 Max Paddock
  40. Scene 1 Panel 39 / 134 Dialog David: Wow! haha,

    you're soaking. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 39/134 Max Paddock
  41. Scene 1 Panel 40 / 134 Dialog Lin: Yeah, and

    it hurts! Where did you- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 40/134 Max Paddock
  42. Scene 1 Panel 41 / 134 Action Notes Water blast

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  43. Scene 1 Panel 42 / 134 Action Notes Lin wipes

    her face Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 42/134 Max Paddock
  44. Scene 1 Panel 43 / 134 Action Notes Lin wipes

    her face Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 43/134 Max Paddock
  45. Scene 1 Panel 44 / 134 Action Notes Lin wipes

    her face Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 44/134 Max Paddock
  46. Scene 1 Panel 45 / 134 Dialog Lin: Stop that.

    Where did you- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 45/134 Max Paddock
  47. Scene 1 Panel 46 / 134 Action Notes Water blast

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  48. Scene 1 Panel 47 / 134 Dialog Lin: David, Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 47/134 Max Paddock
  49. Scene 1 Panel 48 / 134 Dialog Lin: where- Mail

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  50. Scene 1 Panel 49 / 134 Action Notes Water Blast

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  54. Scene 1 Panel 53 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  55. Scene 1 Panel 54 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  56. Scene 1 Panel 55 / 134 Action Notes Water Blast

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  57. Scene 1 Panel 56 / 134 Action Notes Door rumbles

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  58. Scene 1 Panel 57 / 134 Action Notes Mail Kid

    The Water-Soaker Page 57/134 Max Paddock
  59. Scene 1 Panel 58 / 134 Action Notes Lin takes

    a deep breath in. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 58/134 Max Paddock
  60. Scene 1 Panel 59 / 134 Dialog Lin: Phew... Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 59/134 Max Paddock
  61. Scene 1 Panel 60 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  62. Scene 1 Panel 61 / 134 Action Notes Water blasts

    down the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 61/134 Max Paddock
  63. Scene 1 Panel 62 / 134 Action Notes Water blasts

    down the door Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 62/134 Max Paddock
  64. Scene 1 Panel 63 / 134 Action Notes The stream

    from the water soaker slows down Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 63/134 Max Paddock
  65. Scene 1 Panel 64 / 134 Action Notes The stream

    from the water soaker slows down Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 64/134 Max Paddock
  66. Scene 1 Panel 65 / 134 Action Notes The stream

    from the water soaker slows down Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 65/134 Max Paddock
  67. Scene 1 Panel 66 / 134 Action Notes The stream

    from the water soaker slows down Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 66/134 Max Paddock
  68. Scene 1 Panel 67 / 134 Action Notes The stream

    from the water soaker slows down Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 67/134 Max Paddock
  69. Scene 1 Panel 68 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  70. Scene 1 Panel 69 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  71. Scene 1 Panel 70 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  72. Scene 1 Panel 71 / 134 Dialog Mona and David:

    Pfft- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 71/134 Max Paddock
  73. Scene 1 Panel 72 / 134 Dialog David and Mona

    laughs Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 72/134 Max Paddock
  74. Scene 1 Panel 73 / 134 Dialog David and Mona

    laughs Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 73/134 Max Paddock
  75. Scene 1 Panel 74 / 134 Dialog David and Mona

    laughs Action Notes Lin stomps in Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 74/134 Max Paddock
  76. Scene 1 Panel 75 / 134 Dialog David and Mona

    laughs Action Notes Lin stomps in Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 75/134 Max Paddock
  77. Scene 1 Panel 76 / 134 Dialog David and Mona

    laughs Action Notes Lin stomps in Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 76/134 Max Paddock
  78. Scene 1 Panel 77 / 134 Dialog Lin: Gimme that!

    Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 77/134 Max Paddock
  79. Scene 1 Panel 78 / 134 Action Notes Lin grabs

    the water soaker Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 78/134 Max Paddock
  80. Scene 1 Panel 79 / 134 Dialog Lin: Where'd you

    get this? Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 79/134 Max Paddock
  81. Scene 1 Panel 80 / 134 Dialog David: It's the

    new Water-Soaker 5000. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 80/134 Max Paddock
  82. Scene 1 Panel 81 / 134 Dialog David: It's a

    special delivery. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 81/134 Max Paddock
  83. Scene 1 Panel 82 / 134 Dialog Lin: It's someone's

    special delivery? Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 82/134 Max Paddock
  84. Scene 1 Panel 83 / 134 Dialog David: Yeah! Aren't

    they a lucky someone? Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 83/134 Max Paddock
  85. Scene 1 Panel 84 / 134 Dialog Lin: David, Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 84/134 Max Paddock
  86. Scene 1 Panel 85 / 134 Dialog Lin: You can't

    open someone's box without their permission. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 85/134 Max Paddock
  87. Scene 1 Panel 86 / 134 Dialog David: It's okay,

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  88. Scene 1 Panel 87 / 134 Dialog David: They'll never

    know. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 87/134 Max Paddock
  89. Scene 1 Panel 88 / 134 Dialog David: Lin, Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 88/134 Max Paddock
  90. Scene 1 Panel 89 / 134 Dialog David: I should

    really put it back in the box now. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 89/134 Max Paddock
  91. Scene 1 Panel 90 / 134 Dialog Lin: No! I

    need to report this. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 90/134 Max Paddock
  92. Scene 1 Panel 91 / 134 Dialog David: No you

    don't. Just give it back. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 91/134 Max Paddock
  93. Scene 1 Panel 92 / 134 Action Notes Lin and

    David tug-o-war with the water soaker. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 92/134 Max Paddock
  94. Scene 1 Panel 93 / 134 Action Notes Lin and

    David tug-o-war with the water soaker. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 93/134 Max Paddock
  95. Scene 1 Panel 94 / 134 Action Notes Lin and

    David tug-o-war with the water soaker. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 94/134 Max Paddock
  96. Scene 1 Panel 95 / 134 Dialog Mona: Um, you

    guys should be- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 95/134 Max Paddock
  97. Scene 1 Panel 96 / 134 Dialog Mona: Um... Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 96/134 Max Paddock
  98. Scene 1 Panel 97 / 134 Dialog Mona: Guys, maybe

    we should put it back now. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 97/134 Max Paddock
  99. Scene 1 Panel 98 / 134 Dialog Mona: Really, you

    guys should be more-- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 98/134 Max Paddock
  100. Scene 1 Panel 99 / 134 Dialog Mona: Really, you

    guys should be more-- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 99/134 Max Paddock
  101. Scene 1 Panel 100 / 134 Dialog Mona: Um, you

    guys should be- Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 100/134 Max Paddock
  102. Scene 1 Panel 101 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  108. Scene 1 Panel 107 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  112. Scene 1 Panel 111 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  113. Scene 1 Panel 112 / 134 Action Notes The water

    soaker crashes to the ground and breaks. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 112/134 Max Paddock
  114. Scene 1 Panel 113 / 134 Dialog Mona: Careful... Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 113/134 Max Paddock
  115. Scene 1 Panel 114 / 134 Dialog David: Uh oh.

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  116. Scene 1 Panel 115 / 134 Dialog Lin: Well, looks

    like you're trouble. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 115/134 Max Paddock
  117. Scene 1 Panel 116 / 134 Action Notes Lin walks

    back into her house as David gathers the pieces of the broken water soaker. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 116/134 Max Paddock
  118. Scene 1 Panel 117 / 134 Action Notes David gathers

    the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 117/134 Max Paddock
  119. Scene 1 Panel 118 / 134 Action Notes David gathers

    the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 118/134 Max Paddock
  120. Scene 1 Panel 119 / 134 Action Notes David gathers

    the pieces of the broken water soaker. Lin tries to put her door back up. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 119/134 Max Paddock
  121. Scene 1 Panel 120 / 134 Action Notes David gathers

    the pieces of the broken water soaker. Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 120/134 Max Paddock
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  123. Scene 1 Panel 122 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  124. Scene 1 Panel 123 / 134 Dialog Mona: David? Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 123/134 Max Paddock
  125. Scene 1 Panel 124 / 134 Mail Kid The Water-Soaker

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  126. Scene 1 Panel 125 / 134 Action Notes David slowly

    raises the broken pieces Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 125/134 Max Paddock
  127. Scene 1 Panel 126 / 134 Action Notes David slowly

    raises the broken pieces Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 126/134 Max Paddock
  128. Scene 1 Panel 127 / 134 Action Notes David slowly

    raises the broken pieces Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 127/134 Max Paddock
  129. Scene 1 Panel 128 / 134 Action Notes David slowly

    raises the broken pieces Mail Kid The Water-Soaker Page 128/134 Max Paddock
  130. Scene 1 Panel 129 / 134 Dialog David: B- Mail

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  131. Scene 1 Panel 130 / 134 Dialog David: B- Mail

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  132. Scene 1 Panel 131 / 134 Dialog David: -b- Mail

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  133. Scene 1 Panel 132 / 134 Dialog David: -b- Mail

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  134. Scene 1 Panel 133 / 134 Dialog David: b-broke. Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 133/134 Max Paddock
  135. Scene 1 Panel 134 / 134 Dialog David: b-broke. Mail

    Kid The Water-Soaker Page 134/134 Max Paddock