"Peppermint" Adapted Scene

(페퍼민트 - 백온유) "Peppermint," Korean novel by writer Baek Onew, is about a high school girl named Si-An who confronts a childhood friend whose history is linked with her post-pandemic comatose mother. I adapted a scene from the climax of the story, with adjustments to dialogue and performance to contextualize the plot in short-form.

Transcript

1. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog [YANG VILLA 603] *RAIN SFX*
2. Scene 1 Panel 2 Dialog [YANG VILLA 603] *RAIN SFX*
3. Scene 1 Panel 3 Dialog [YANG VILLA 603] *RAIN SFX*
4. Scene 2 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-won: "I'm sorry, Si-an."
5. Scene 2 Panel 2 Dialog Hae-won: "I'm sorry, Si-an."
6. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog [OXYGEN TANK]
7. Scene 4 Panel 1
8. Scene 6 Panel 1
9. Scene 6 Panel 2
10. Scene 6 Panel 3
11. Scene 7 Panel 1
12. Scene 7 Panel 2
13. Scene 7 Panel 3
14. Scene 7 Panel 4
15. Scene 7 Panel 5
16. Scene 7 Panel 6
17. Scene 7 Panel 7
18. Scene 7 Panel 8
19. Scene 8 Panel 1
20. Scene 8 Panel 2
21. Scene 8 Panel 2
22. Scene 8 Panel 3
23. Scene 8 Panel 4
24. Scene 8 Panel 5
25. Scene 9 Panel 1
26. Scene 9 Panel 2
27. Scene 9 Panel 3
28. Scene 9 Panel 4
29. Scene 9 Panel 5
30. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an: "This is the least you could do for me."
31. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog Si-an: "This is the least you could do for me."
32. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog Si-an: "This is the least you could do for me."
33. Scene 10 Panel 3
34. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog "For my family."
35. Scene 11 Panel 2
36. Scene 11 Panel 3
37. Scene 11 Panel 4
38. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-Won: "Wait!"
39. Scene 12 Panel 2 Dialog "What if I helped you instead?"
40. Scene 13 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-Won: "You could go to college. I'm sure that's what --"
41. Scene 14 Panel 1
42. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog Si-An: "You still think it's that easy?"
43. Scene 15 Panel 2 Dialog Si-An: "You still think it's that easy?"
44. Scene 15 Panel 3
45. Scene 15 Panel 4 Dialog "I haven't had a mother for six years."
46. Scene 15 Panel 5 Dialog "I haven't had a mother for six years."
47. Scene 15 Panel 6 Dialog "I haven't had a mother for six years."
48. Scene 16 Panel 1 Dialog "You don't get to say I gave up."
49. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog Hae-Won: "But how could I live, knowing that I..."
50. Scene 16 Panel 3
51. Scene 17 Panel 1
52. Scene 18 Panel 1
53. Scene 18 Panel 2
54. Scene 18 Panel 3
55. Scene 18 Panel 4 Dialog Si-an: "You could live better than the way I've had to."
56. Scene 18 Panel 5 Dialog Si-an: "You could live better than the way I've had to."
57. Scene 18 Panel 6 Dialog Si-an: "You could live better than the way I've had to."
58. Scene 19 Panel 1
59. Scene 19 Panel 2
60. Scene 19 Panel 3
61. Scene 19 Panel 4
62. Scene 19 Panel 5 Dialog Hae-won: "Si-an!"
63. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog "Please!"
64. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog *DOOR SLAM SFX*
65. Scene 20 Panel 3
66. Scene 21 Panel 1 Dialog *STOMPING FOOTSTEPS RECEDING*
67. Scene 21 Panel 2 Dialog *FRONT DOOR SLAM SFX*
68. Scene 21 Panel 3
69. Scene 22 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-won: "Auntie... I'm so sorry... What do I do?"
70. Scene 22 Panel 2 Dialog Hae-won: "Auntie... I'm so sorry... What do I do?"
71. Scene 22 Panel 3
72. Scene 23 Panel 1
73. Scene 24 Panel 1
74. Scene 25 Panel 1 Dialog *FRONT DOOR UNLOCK, OPENING SFX*
75. Scene 25 Panel 2
76. Scene 25 Panel 3 Dialog MALE VOICE: "Si-an...?"
77. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog *GLASS CLINKING NOISES*
78. Scene 1 Panel 2 Dialog *DOORKNOB TURNING*
79. Scene 1 Panel 3
80. Scene 1 Panel 4 Dialog Si-an's father: "Si-an?"
81. Scene 2 Panel 1
82. Scene 2 Panel 2
83. Scene 2 Panel 3
84. Scene 2 Panel 4
85. Scene 2 Panel 5
86. Scene 2 Panel 6 Dialog *BOTTLES CLINKING, PLASTIC BAG SFX*
87. Scene 2 Panel 7
88. Scene 2 Panel 8
89. Scene 2 Panel 9
90. Scene 2 Panel 9
91. Scene 3 Panel 1
92. Scene 3 Panel 2
93. Scene 3 Panel 3
94. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father (muffled): "Si-an?"
95. Scene 4 Panel 2
96. Scene 4 Panel 3
97. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog *FOOTSTEPS APPROACHING SFX*
98. Scene 5 Panel 1
99. Scene 5 Panel 2
100. Scene 5 Panel 2
101. Scene 5 Panel 3
102. Scene 5 Panel 4
103. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog *DOOR CREAK SFX*
104. Scene 6 Panel 2
105. Scene 6 Panel 3 Dialog Si-an's father: Honey?
106. Scene 7 Panel 1
107. Scene 7 Panel 2
108. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father (slurring words): Honey, where's our Si-an gone?
109. Scene 8 Panel 2
110. Scene 8 Panel 3
111. Scene 8 Panel 4
112. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog *FOOTSTEPS SFX*
113. Scene 9 Panel 2
114. Scene 9 Panel 3
115. Scene 9 Panel 4
116. Scene 9 Panel 5
117. Scene 10 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father: "Honey..."
118. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog "Truth is, I got laid off last week."
119. Scene 11 Panel 1 Dialog (cont'd): "Si-an's been acting differently lately, too..."
120. Scene 11 Panel 2
121. Scene 11 Panel 3 Dialog "All this time, she's stayed strong."
122. Scene 11 Panel 4 Dialog "I wonder..."
123. Scene 11 Panel 5
124. Scene 11 Panel 6
125. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog "I wonder
126. Scene 12 Panel 2
127. Scene 12 Panel 3 Dialog how long we'll last..."
128. Scene 13 Panel 1
129. Scene 13 Panel 2
130. Scene 13 Panel 3
131. Scene 14 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father (muffled): You might outlast us...
132. Scene 14 Panel 2
133. Scene 14 Panel 3
134. Scene 15 Panel 1
135. Scene 15 Panel 2
136. Scene 16 Panel 1
137. Scene 16 Panel 2
138. Scene 16 Panel 3
139. Scene 16 Panel 4
140. Scene 16 Panel 5
141. Scene 16 Panel 6 Dialog [112 EMERGENCY]
142. Scene 17 Panel 1 Dialog "How about we give it a rest?"
143. Scene 17 Panel 2
144. Scene 17 Panel 3 Dialog *VALVE SHUTTING SFX*
145. Scene 18 Panel 1
146. Scene 18 Panel 2
147. Scene 19 Panel 1
148. Scene 19 Panel 1
149. Scene 19 Panel 1
150. Scene 19 Panel 1
151. Scene 19 Panel 2
152. Scene 19 Panel 2
153. Scene 19 Panel 2
154. Scene 19 Panel 3
155. Scene 19 Panel 3
156. Scene 19 Panel 3
157. Scene 19 Panel 4
158. Scene 19 Panel 4
159. Scene 19 Panel 4
160. Scene 19 Panel 5
161. Scene 19 Panel 5
162. Scene 19 Panel 5
163. Scene 19 Panel 6 Dialog *MACHINERY BEEPING SFX*
164. Scene 19 Panel 6
165. Scene 19 Panel 6
166. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog *BED RUSTLING SFX*
167. Scene 21 Panel 1
168. Scene 21 Panel 2
169. Scene 21 Panel 3
170. Scene 21 Panel 4
171. Scene 21 Panel 5
172. Scene 21 Panel 6
173. Scene 21 Panel 7
174. Scene 21 Panel 8
175. Scene 21 Panel 9
176. Scene 21 Panel 10
177. Scene 21 Panel 11
178. Scene 22 Panel 1
179. Scene 22 Panel 2
180. Scene 22 Panel 3 Dialog A voice: Hey.
181. Scene 22 Panel 4
182. Scene 22 Panel 5 Dialog GASP
183. Scene 22 Panel 6
184. Scene 22 Panel 6
185. Scene 23 Panel 1
186. Scene 23 Panel 2
187. Scene 23 Panel 3
188. Scene 23 Panel 4 Dialog Hae-won 2: You're going to regret it for the rest of your life
189. Scene 23 Panel 5 Dialog Hae-won 2: You're going to regret it for the rest of your life
190. Scene 24 Panel 1 Dialog ... if you don't act now.
191. Scene 24 Panel 2 Dialog ... if you don't act now.
192. Scene 24 Panel 3
193. Scene 24 Panel 4
194. Scene 24 Panel 5
195. Scene 24 Panel 6
196. Scene 25 Panel 1
197. Scene 25 Panel 2
198. Scene 25 Panel 3
199. Scene 25 Panel 4
200. Scene 26 Panel 1
201. Scene 26 Panel 2
202. Scene 26 Panel 3 Dialog Si-an: Just let her die.
203. Scene 26 Panel 4 Dialog Si-an: Just let her die.
204. Scene 27 Panel 1 Dialog *STARTLED EXCLAMATION*
205. Scene 27 Panel 2
206. Scene 27 Panel 3
207. Scene 28 Panel 1 Dialog *IMPACT SFX*
208. Scene 28 Panel 2
209. Scene 28 Panel 3 Dialog *THUNK SFX*
210. Scene 29 Panel 1
211. Scene 29 Panel 2
212. Scene 30 Panel 1
213. Scene 30 Panel 1
214. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog Si-an's father: "Huh."
215. Scene 30 Panel 2
216. Scene 30 Panel 3
217. Scene 30 Panel 3
218. Scene 30 Panel 3
219. Scene 30 Panel 4
220. Scene 30 Panel 4
221. Scene 30 Panel 4
222. Scene 30 Panel 5
223. Scene 30 Panel 5
224. Scene 31 Panel 1 Dialog *APPROACHING FOOTSTEP*
225. Scene 31 Panel 2
226. Scene 31 Panel 3
227. Scene 31 Panel 4
228. Scene 32 Panel 1
229. Scene 32 Panel 1
230. Scene 32 Panel 1
231. Scene 32 Panel 1
232. Scene 32 Panel 1
233. Scene 33 Panel 1
234. Scene 33 Panel 2 Dialog Si-an's father: "S...Si-an?"
235. Scene 33 Panel 3 Dialog Si-an's father: "S...Si-an?"
236. Scene 33 Panel 4 Dialog Si-an's father: "S...Si-an?"
237. Scene 34 Panel 1
238. Scene 34 Panel 2
239. Scene 34 Panel 3
240. Scene 35 Panel 1
241. Scene 36 Panel 1
242. Scene 37 Panel 1
243. Scene 37 Panel 2
244. Scene 37 Panel 3 Dialog *THUD SFX*
245. Scene 37 Panel 4 Dialog *THUD SFX*
246. Scene 38 Panel 1 Dialog *SLAM SFX*
247. Scene 38 Panel 2 Dialog *SLAM SFX*
248. Scene 38 Panel 3 Dialog *HAE-WON WINCING*
249. Scene 38 Panel 4 Dialog *HAE-WON WINCING*
250. Scene 38 Panel 5
251. Scene 38 Panel 6 Dialog Si-an's dad: "Wh..."
252. Scene 1 Panel 1 Dialog "Who the hell are you?"
253. Scene 1 Panel 2
254. Scene 1 Panel 3 Dialog "What are you doing here?"
255. Scene 1 Panel 4
256. Scene 2 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-won: "I'm Si-an's friend--"
257. Scene 3 Panel 1 Dialog "Remember me?"
258. Scene 4 Panel 1 Dialog (cont'd): "We lived in the same apartment building---"
259. Scene 4 Panel 2
260. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog *HAE-WON WINCING*
261. Scene 6 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father: This is none of your business.
262. Scene 6 Panel 2 Dialog Si-an's father: This is none of your business.
263. Scene 6 Panel 3 Dialog Si-an's father: This is none of your business.
264. Scene 7 Panel 1
265. Scene 7 Panel 2
266. Scene 8 Panel 1
267. Scene 8 Panel 2
268. Scene 8 Panel 3
269. Scene 8 Panel 4
270. Scene 9 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father: "Why'd you have to get involved?"
271. Scene 10 Panel 1
272. Scene 10 Panel 2 Dialog *HAE-WON WINCING*
273. Scene 10 Panel 3
274. Scene 11 Panel 1
275. Scene 11 Panel 2
276. Scene 11 Panel 3
277. Scene 12 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an's father: "Are you alright?"
278. Scene 13 Panel 1
279. Scene 14 Panel 1
280. Scene 14 Panel 2
281. Scene 14 Panel 3
282. Scene 14 Panel 4
283. Scene 14 Panel 5
284. Scene 14 Panel 6
285. Scene 15 Panel 1
286. Scene 15 Panel 2
287. Scene 15 Panel 3
288. Scene 15 Panel 4
289. Scene 16 Panel 1
290. Scene 16 Panel 2
291. Scene 17 Panel 1
292. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog *VALVE SFX*
293. Scene 18 Panel 1 Dialog *MACHINERY BEEPING SFX*
294. Scene 18 Panel 2 Dialog *MACHINERY BEEPING SFX*
295. Scene 18 Panel 2
296. Scene 19 Panel 1
297. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog *HAE-WON BREATHING HARD*
298. Scene 20 Panel 2
299. Scene 20 Panel 3
300. Scene 20 Panel 4
301. Scene 20 Panel 5
302. Scene 20 Panel 6
303. Scene 20 Panel 7
304. Scene 20 Panel 8 Dialog Si-an's father: "You must find me despicable."
305. Scene 20 Panel 9
306. Scene 20 Panel 10 Dialog Hae-won: "That's not true. I really don't."
307. Scene 20 Panel 11 Dialog Hae-won: "That's not true. I really don't."
308. Scene 20 Panel 12 Dialog Si-an's father: "Please keep this a secret from Si-an."
309. Scene 21 Panel 1
310. Scene 21 Panel 2 Dialog *DOOR UNLOCK SFX*
311. Scene 21 Panel 3
312. Scene 21 Panel 4
313. Scene 22 Panel 1 Dialog *FOOTSTEPS APPROACHING*
314. Scene 22 Panel 2
315. Scene 22 Panel 3
316. Scene 23 Panel 1
317. Scene 23 Panel 2
318. Scene 23 Panel 3 Dialog *BEDROOM DOOR CREAK SFX*
319. Scene 24 Panel 1
320. Scene 24 Panel 2
321. Scene 24 Panel 3
322. Scene 25 Panel 1 Dialog Hae-won: "Si-an..."
323. Scene 26 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an: "You're.."
324. Scene 26 Panel 2
325. Scene 26 Panel 3
326. Scene 26 Panel 4
327. Scene 27 Panel 1
328. Scene 28 Panel 1 Dialog Si-an: "Dad."