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Strange Planet: "Before Star Rise" Excerpt 1 (2022)

Strange Planet: "Before Star Rise" Excerpt 1 (2022)

Rachel Green

October 08, 2023
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  1. Scene 002 Panel 7 Dialog MANAGER: I have to be

    honest. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 8/142
  2. Scene 002 Panel 8 Dialog MANAGER: I have to be

    honest. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 9/142
  3. Scene 002 Panel 9 Dialog MANAGER: I have to be

    honest. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 10/142
  4. Scene 002 Panel 10 Dialog MANAGER: I have to be

    honest. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 11/142
  5. Scene 002 Panel 11 Dialog MANAGER: The reason I was

    looking at that book on Cocoslab Island is because Iʼm thinking of applying to a learnstitution there. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 12/142
  6. Scene 003 Panel 3 Dialog MANAGER (O.S.): I mean -

    CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 15/142
  7. Scene 004 Panel 1 Dialog MANAGER: - who even knows

    if I'll get in. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 16/142
  8. Scene 004 Panel 2 Dialog MANAGER: Maybe I shouldn't even

    apply. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 17/142
  9. Scene 004 Panel 3 Dialog MANAGER: I like my job

    at the Careful Now. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 18/142
  10. Scene 004 Panel 4 Dialog MANAGER: It pays me adequate

    earnings - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 19/142
  11. Scene 004 Panel 5 Dialog MANAGER: - and I can

    consume anything that has fallen on the ground... CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 20/142
  12. Scene 004 Panel 7 Dialog MANAGER: ...for more than five

    seconds. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 22/142
  13. Scene 005 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR: I think you should

    apply. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 23/142
  14. Scene 005 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR: And I believe you'll

    get in. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 24/142
  15. Scene 005 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: You have so much

    experience, plus a great work ethic - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 25/142
  16. Scene 006 Panel 2 Dialog MANAGER: But I prefer to

    keep my expectations low so I don't get disappointed. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 28/142
  17. Scene 006 Panel 4 Dialog MANAGER: But I prefer to

    keep my expectations low so I don't get disappointed. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 30/142
  18. Scene 006 Panel 5 Dialog MANAGER: But I prefer to

    keep my expectations low so I don't get disappointed. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 31/142
  19. Scene 007 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR: Ah. I've found one

    of our significant differences - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 39/142
  20. Scene 007 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR: Ah. I've found one

    of our significant differences - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 40/142
  21. Scene 007 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: - besides you loving

    vibrating creatures - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 41/142
  22. Scene 007 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: - besides you loving

    vibrating creatures - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 42/142
  23. Scene 007 Panel 5 Dialog REGULAR: - and me knowing

    they could case my lungs to collapse. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 43/142
  24. Scene 007 Panel 6 Dialog REGULAR: - and me knowing

    they could case my lungs to collapse. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 44/142
  25. Scene 007 Panel 7 Dialog REGULAR: - I prefer to

    look at the positive. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 45/142
  26. Scene 007 Panel 8 Dialog REGULAR: - I prefer to

    look at the positive. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 46/142
  27. Scene 007 Panel 9 Dialog REGULAR: - I prefer to

    look at the positive. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 47/142
  28. Scene 007 Panel 10 Dialog REGULAR: - I prefer to

    look at the positive. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 48/142
  29. Scene 007 Panel 11 Dialog REGULAR: - I prefer to

    look at the positive. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 49/142
  30. Scene 008 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): When you do

    that, you start to see more positive things around you. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 50/142
  31. Scene 008 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): When you do

    that, you start to see more positive things around you. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 51/142
  32. Scene 008 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): When you do

    that, you start to see more positive things around you. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 52/142
  33. Scene 008 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): When you do

    that, you start to see more positive things around you. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 53/142
  34. Scene 008 Panel 5 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): When you do

    that, you start to see more positive things around you. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 54/142
  35. Scene 012 Panel 8 Dialog REGULAR: Here, I'm gonna make

    a wish. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 74/142
  36. Scene 013 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR: Do you think it

    will come true? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 76/142
  37. Scene 013 Panel 3 Dialog MANAGER: Do I think throwing

    a small piece of currency into a basin of liquid has the magical power to turn thoughts into reality? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 77/142
  38. Scene 013 Panel 5 Dialog MANAGER: I don't think I

    do. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 79/142
  39. Scene 015 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: I think it will.

    CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 90/142
  40. Scene 015 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: I think it will.

    CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 91/142
  41. Scene 017 Panel 4 Dialog MANAGER: Have you always thought

    like this? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 99/142
  42. Scene 018 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): My lifegiver was

    a mid-level leader in the Water Protection Army so we moved around a lot when I was a smaller being. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 103/142
  43. Scene 018 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): My lifegiver was

    a mid-level leader in the Water Protection Army so we moved around a lot when I was a smaller being. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 104/142
  44. Scene 018 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR (O.S.): My lifegiver was

    a mid-level leader in the Water Protection Army so we moved around a lot when I was a smaller being. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 105/142
  45. Scene 019 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR: I found that I

    had two choices: I could be disappointed to keep leaving the friends and learnstitutions I liked or I could be happy to meet new beings and see new places around the orb. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 106/142
  46. Scene 019 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR: It was better to

    be happy. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 107/142
  47. Scene 020 Panel 1 Dialog MAANGER: That's very wise for

    a small being. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 108/142
  48. Scene 020 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: I was often told

    I was knowledgeable beyond my revolutions. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 110/142
  49. Scene 021 Panel 1 Dialog MANAGER: So how did you

    end up in Beingsburg? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 111/142
  50. Scene 021 Panel 2 Dialog MANAGER: So how did you

    end up in Beingsburg? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 112/142
  51. Scene 021 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: My sibling moved here

    for their vocation and spoke highly of the greenery. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 113/142
  52. Scene 021 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: My sibling moved here

    for their vocation and spoke highly of the greenery. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 114/142
  53. Scene 021 Panel 5 Dialog REGULAR: So I followed them

    to pursue my passion of landscape arts. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 115/142
  54. Scene 021 Panel 6 Dialog REGULAR: So I followed them

    to pursue my passion of landscape arts. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 116/142
  55. Scene 021 Panel 7 Dialog REGULAR: So I followed them

    to pursue my passion of landscape arts. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 117/142
  56. Scene 022 Panel 1 Dialog MANAGER: Oh, is that what

    you do? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 118/142
  57. Scene 022 Panel 2 Dialog MANAGER: Oh, is that what

    you do? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 119/142
  58. Scene 022 Panel 3 Dialog MANAGER: Oh, is that what

    you do? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 120/142
  59. Scene 022 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: No, I currently sell

    habitats to beings - CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 121/142
  60. Scene 022 Panel 5 Dialog REGULAR: - until i can

    break through the green ceiling. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 122/142
  61. Scene 022 Panel 6 Dialog REGULAR: - until i can

    break through the green ceiling. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 123/142
  62. Scene 023 Panel 3 Dialog MANAGER: Think you'll stay for

    a while or go see some new places around the orb? CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 127/142
  63. Scene 023 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: A while. I like

    it here. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 128/142
  64. Scene 024 Panel 1 Dialog REGULAR: Surprisingly, I like the

    comfort of going to the same place every day to eat the same thing. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 129/142
  65. Scene 024 Panel 2 Dialog REGULAR: Plus, I have a

    vocation I like. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 130/142
  66. Scene 024 Panel 3 Dialog REGULAR: And I have nice

    friends here, too. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 131/142
  67. Scene 026 Panel 4 Dialog REGULAR: - with the structural

    engineer. CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 137/142
  68. Scene 028 Panel 1 Dialog MAANGER: I'm happy for you.

    CP109 SQ 040 RG V01 Page 142/142