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Edible (full)

Sue S
August 16, 2020

Edible (full)

Written and directed by Kandis Hutcherson

Sue S

August 16, 2020
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  1. Action Notes Handheld camera opens on Celeste walking down Sara's

    apartment complex hallway, adjusting to juggle the flowers, card, and overnight bag.
  2. Dialog SARA: Hey! Action Notes Handheld camera swings around with

    Sara and follows her down the hall, catching Celeste on both sides before settling into the next OTS shot.
  3. Dialog CELESTE: you've been through a lot this week, with

    school, Action Notes Celeste walks over to Sara on the couch, working. Camera is alive as she walks over.
  4. Dialog CELESTE: Oh my god, the first time I had

    an edible... Action Notes Camera angles up and films behind Celeste. Her head bounces as she tells the story, engaged.
  5. Dialog CELESTE: telling her story Action Notes The camera, listening

    to Celeste, floats over to Sara, who isn't paying attention and has picked up her papers again.
  6. Dialog CELESTE: telling her story Action Notes Handheld camera swings

    around Celeste right as Sara grabs an entire weed cookie and eats it quickly. Celeste doesn't notice as she keeps telling her story.
  7. Action Notes Celeste reaches for a part of the cookie

    she prepared and notices her card, unopened on the table.
  8. Dialog SARA: I have to tell you something... the other

    night at the beach. Noor was telling the truth. Action Notes Celeste starts to sit up at the end of the shot.
  9. Dialog SARA: I have to tell you something... the other

    night at the beach. Noor was telling the truth. Action Notes Celeste starts to sit up at the end of the shot.
  10. Dialog SARA: I have to tell you something... the other

    night at the beach. Noor was telling the truth. Action Notes Celeste starts to sit up at the end of the shot.
  11. Action Notes Camera lingers on framed photographs, one of Noor

    and Sara and the other of Sara as a baby with her dad. A sound jolts the camera - a door opening.
  12. Action Notes Camera drifts as Sara walks back towards Celeste,

    revealing the photos from the previous shot on the bookshelf next to the bathroom door.
  13. Action Notes Camera drifts as Sara walks back towards Celeste,

    revealing the photos from the previous shot on the bookshelf next to the bathroom door.
  14. Dialog CELESTE: It's just the cookie. (pause) So you and

    Noor were a couple? You told me she was your cousin.
  15. Dialog SARA: I feel like... Action Notes As Celeste walks

    Sara back to the couch, Sara makes an exploding motion to show how she's feeling. The camera microadjusts.
  16. Dialog SARA: I feel different... Is it too bright in

    here to you? CELESTE: Girl, you are really tripping. Don't try to change the subject.
  17. Dialog SARA: Khallas. I have to get out. Action Notes

    Camera swings around as Sara freaks out and leaves the apartment.
  18. Action Notes Sara spins around frantically, totally disoriented. She stays

    in focus but the background blurs dangerously as she spins.
  19. Action Notes Sara spins around frantically, totally disoriented. She stays

    in focus but the background blurs dangerously as she spins.
  20. Action Notes Sara spins around frantically, totally disoriented. She stays

    in focus but the background blurs dangerously as she spins.
  21. Action Notes Celeste panics, not knowing what Sara said on

    the phone. She assumes Noor is on her way with the police.
  22. Action Notes Sara jumps from the bed and stares oddly

    at Celeste, apparently terrified.
  23. Dialog SARA: I have to go to the hospital immediately.

    CELETE: Baby, no, we don't need to go to the hospital, we should try to relax.
  24. Action Notes Celeste and Sara rush to get dressed and

    ready. Celeste searches for her glasses but is unable to find them.
  25. Dialog SARA: Yalla, we have to go now. Action Notes

    Celeste gives up her glasses search and chases behind Sara.
  26. Action Notes We see a woman, JASMINE, holding her mail

    and chatting with the CONCIERGE. The women approach the desk and Celeste gets excited, recognizing them from the night of the fight with Noor.
  27. Action Notes Jasmine begins speaking to Sara in Arabic. The

    concierge watches confused. Sara is slightly relieved.
  28. Dialog SARA: (to the concierge) Please get us a taxi

    to the nearest hospital. CONCIERGE: Right away.
  29. Action Notes Jasmine awkwardly sits between Sara and Celeste. Celeste

    rests her head on the window exhausted. Sara keeps her head down.
  30. Action Notes Celeste holds Sara's head in her lap as

    she falls asleep. Celeste sits awake for a while before dozing off. The sun is rising.
  31. Action Notes Celeste brings Sara food in bed. Sara is

    under the covers, Celeste on top.
  32. Dialog SARA: Oh my God, what happened to me? CELESTE:

    After we ate the edible, you started freaking out.
  33. Dialog CELESTE: The nurses were laughing at us. We must

    have looked so ridiculous. Me without my glasses, I couldn't see a thing.
  34. Dialog CELESTE: I shared my experience with you from San

    Fran but this is way more extreme. SARA: Fucked up. Action Notes The tension is building.
  35. Dialog SARA: Help me, Habibi. Action Notes Sara quickly gets

    up and starts bagging up trash and other items.