商寫Unit8-練習題解答1102

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1. 花旗美語-1-商用寫作 商用寫作 Unit8 隨堂練習練習解答 PART IV: Expository/ Persuasive Writing Practice (解答) ˕隨堂練習(1)
   
   
   
   
   
   請根據題目，試著寫出一段 expository paragraph 的大綱 Topic: Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? 1. Thesis Statement: Since you can barely live individually in modern society, community life becomes important. 由於在現代的社會幾乎不可能獨自生存，團體的重要性變得重大。 2. Supporting Ideas: (1) Reason: First of all, organizations or groups are competition environments which help us to be advanced fast. 首先，團體或組織為具競爭性的環境，皆可幫助我們快速進步。 (2) Reason: Furthermore, we can help each other when we work in a group. We are not only competitors at work, but also supporters with one another. 再者，在一個團體裡工作可以彼此照顧。我們不僅互相競爭，工作上卻亦可相輔相持， 得到成長。 (3) Reason: Finally, community represents the major side of society, and will definitely shield and benefit any individual. 最後，團體在社會上代表多數的一方，必然可受到團體的庇蔭及福利。 「重要性」和「重大的」用自若都 為”important”的寫法 「競爭」在這個句子裡若當動詞，受詞的「彼此」 就會不斷重複，因此改為名詞。 「被庇蔭」改為主動，主詞的「團體」就不用一直 重複，亦可保持整句話前後主詞一致 “body”的 reasons 如「競 爭」 、 「互相幫助」 、 「受到庇 蔭」 、皆為獨立原因，皆用 以支持「團體重要性」 。
2. 花旗美語-2-商用寫作 ˕隨堂練習(2)
   
   
   
   
   
   請根據題目，試著寫出一段 persuasive paragraph 的大綱 Topic: A gossip culture pervades most companies. Employees like to talk about their bosses or other employees. Is there any advantage to this? What do you think are the disadvantages? Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion. 1. Thesis Statement: Everyone talks about others. In my opinions, there are some pros and cons about gossiping. Gossip has both benefits and drawbacks. 我個人認為，流言蜚語其實是有利有弊、好壞兼具的。 2. Supporting Ideas: (1) Claim: People can get familiar with each other when they talk about the same topic, especially in an atmosphere of identity and shared hatred. 人們總能在討論相同話題時變得熱絡，尤其是在一種認同感亦或同仇敵慨的氛圍裡。 (2) Claim: On the other hand, the unreal part in gossiping can bring along misunderstandings and even augments. 另一方面，流言可能包含的不真實性則能帶來彼此的誤解甚至爭執。 3. Concluding Statement: According to points above, speaking evil of others can be one of the methods to improve interactive communication skills, but we cannot ignore its negative influence. ˜有利有弊™的寫法 “body”的訴求一反一正，相 關且同為一體，