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Where Blackbirds Mourn SAMPLE

Rat
August 20, 2023

Where Blackbirds Mourn SAMPLE

Where Blackbirds Mourn is a feature-length dramatic tragedy with a low fantasy medieval setting. Featuring a large cast of the staff of Frogaia castle, Where Blackbirds Mourn explores how genuine people under pressure destroy themselves.

Rat

August 20, 2023
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  1. (MORE) INT. CEREMONIAL CHAMBERS-MORNING The attendants in the room lean

    towards the Ashenwing, listening intently. ASHENWING And shall be replaced as my heir with Blue, descent of Star. Shocked gasps, Salem staring at the ground in disbelief. RAT (26) Captain of the royal guard wears a lilypad pin on their cape, a small scar on their nose. Rat chuckles. RAT So who wants to tell Star, eh? INT. CASTLE KITCHEN-DAY The kitchen is a wide, bright room. Small windows line the top of the walls for ventilation. Large ovens leave just enough room for racks. BLUE (17) the apprentice chef cheerfully kneads dough to be passed to her mother, STAR (36) the head chef of Frogaia castle expertly pulls the prepared dough into the requested types of loaves, counting the time under her breath before popping them into one of the blazing ovens in a blink. Tapping toes count the oven time. BLUE I think Salem’s gonna be a great King. Blue hums a melody to match Star’s tapping beat, now gathering exotic fruits around them to cut. STAR They have been preparing very long that’s true, but it takes more than preparation to be a good King. Blue glances towards Star, still cutting in beat. BLUE You think they’re missing something Ma? STAR You never know until you’re up on that throne little frog. (MORE)
  2. STAR (CONT’D) 2. There’s a little part of people that

    comes out only when a crown is put on their head, for good or for bad. Blue pushes the platters of fruit over to Star. Star quickly examines the plates for error but simply smiles and moves on. Blue moves over to a row of barrels. In the doorway, Captain Rat’s head pokes out to watch. Rat ducks out of sight as Blue drags a barrel to the table. Rat reappears with WILBUR (26) a wizard with cat ears poking out from the top of his wide-brimmed hat, glowing freckles, rainbow eyes, and a cat tail hidden by his cloak. The twins push and shove trying to get the other to go in. Star notices the twins. STAR (CONT’D) What are you two goofers doing over there? The twins awkwardly stumble through the doorway catching themselves to stand in the kitchen. They elbow each other to get the other to talk as Star watches with an eyebrow raised. STAR (CONT’D) Fine. Einy meiny miney you. Star switches pointing between the two to land on Wilbur. WILBUR The will’s been read and... there was a surprise announcement? RAT Turns out Salem’s not the heir now? Star stops tapping, the room goes silent as Star stares at the twins, who inch away from her. Blue looks between the three adults with confusion. BLUE Why? What’s wrong? Star’s stern expression wavers. Leaning against the worktable for support, Star puts one hand over her face. The oven starts smoking. Blue yelps and runs to save the bread cooking. STAR (CONT’D) 2.
  3. 3. Rat and Wilbur each reach out to comfort Star.

    Star puts a hand up to give them pause, eyebrows clenched in anger. STAR Give it to me straight you two. WILBUR The will says Blue’s inheriting the throne of Frogaia now. Blue drops the paddle he was using to pull the bread from the oven in shock. Just the twins turning in Blue’s direction. BLUE W-wait really?! Twins both give a shrug, Star doesn’t react. RAT Hope you know how to write a decent speech, nobody’d blame you if it was subpar though. Salem might. Wilbur silently nobs in agreement and Star frustratedly pulls them both out as the chef’s apprentice stares off. Star rushes up to Blue and gently holds Blue’s clenched hand. STAR Sweetie.. I know this is a lot. BLUE The funeral is tomorrow isn’t it..? Blue watches Star slowly nod. Blue’s breath catches and their eyes widen, looking from the burnt bread on the ground to the door to Star. BLUE (CONT’D) Shoot! Ma can you finish the meals still? I-I need to prepare?! Blue hurriedly runs out of the room, crumbs scattering as Star’s arm lingers out in Blue’s direction. STAR Yeah.. I’ve got things handled kid. 3.
  4. 4. INT. FAMILY ROOMS-NIGHT Star sits in a modest room,

    tapping at the main table with a candle lit beside her. Storage barrels occupy a corner of the room with linens neatly folded on top. Blue opens the door, messy scroll under her arm. Blue looks exhausted, ink staining his clothes. Blue glances at Star. BLUE Sorry I missed dinner. STAR Blue it’s late but you still have to eat, I’ve got a meal saved. Blue hesitates. Her gaze locked on the door to her bedroom before Blue sighs and falls into a chair across from Star. BLUE Would you wanna look over my notes while I eat? STAR I’d love to my frog. Together they sit at the table, eating and talking until the candle does out. INT. CEREMONIAL CHAMBERS-MORNING The Ashenwing priest stands at the end of the old hall, holding a blackbird in a birdcage with sacred grace. The staff and nobles stand watching the priest. ASHENWING All present here shall bear witness to the departure of our beloved King Callydrias. May the blackbirds carry him to peace. All attendants carry a object of ceremony in their hands, nobles carry exotic bird beaks, the staff hold branches of dye, and those close to Callydrias offer locks of their own hair. Most with locks wear unenthused expressions. The offerings are all laid in a large bowl, the hair last. Captain Rat lays a lock of grey hair, not their brown hair. Salem’s lock is tied ornately, their face red from crying. 4.
  5. 5. Blue goes to place his lock of hair when

    Star catches Blue on the shoulder. Star ties their two locks of hair together and lets Blue put both the hairs in the bowl. The Ashenwing sets down the birdcage. Taking the bowl and pouring crystal-clear water into it then mixing it until the contents become a dye. Using the dye, the Ashenwing decorates the caged blackbird with markings. Releasing it, the bird flies out of the room. ASHENWING (CONT’D) Fly little blackbird and guide us to where the journey home begins! The attendants watch it fly eagerly, following the Ashenwing as they carry the bowl out into the... EXT. CASKET YARD-DAY The restricted courtyard grows wildly and unhampered. In the center of the untrampled flora is an exquisite stone casket. The attendants stop and form a circle around the casket, standing only on the stone paved circle around the courtyard. Only the Ashenwing continues moving through the plants, delicately stepping between plants and letting the contents of the bowl spill and stain their white robes. As the Ashenwing reaches the casket, they empty the bowl at the base of the casket. Taking a measurement of the wind, the Ashenwing adjusts their positioning to be in the wind and motions Blue to come forward opposite to them. ASHENWING The blackbird flies it’s course, so let us begin our duties. Blue takes in a deep breath as he stands at one end of the open stone casket, he looks down at Callydrias laid inside. The King’s pale skin had already begun to lose it’s color, his brown hair left braided in two large loops in the back with the top hair left flowing. The sides of his face are taken over by a muttonchop beard. A fine blue vest is held in place by his cape, giving form to the deep blue undershirt. Blue clears her throat and looks up again at the crowd. 5.