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Young Pledges

Rat
September 03, 2023

Young Pledges

Two young orphans living in the sewers are forced to find direction in a bigger world they don't understand when those who rule society pull them apart.

Rat

September 03, 2023
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  1. INT. FROGAIA SEWERS-DAY
    Below the bustling streets of the Frogaia capital district
    lies the system of sewer tunnels, a small camp set up in a
    broken section of wall in the tunnel.
    Two children sit next to each other in the dingy setup.
    WILBUR (15) is a young boy with curly brown hair and purple
    eyes. RAT (15) is his twin sibling, who watches him scratch a
    heist plan into the dirt with a distant, dumbfounded look.
    WILBUR
    It’s a pretty simple distract and
    snatch setup, just do what you do
    best and I’ll handle the get away.
    Rat nods quickly and stands up with energy, holding a book
    close to their chest.
    RAT
    Yummies here we come!
    Rat scurries over to a pile of cloth lifts it to tuck their
    precious book under the sheets, other small trinkets hide in
    the pile.
    Rat hesitates, flipping through a few pages but closing it
    back on the cover. The title is in English but they can’t
    read any of the book’s text.
    They set the book in it’s safe place before joining Wilbur.
    The both of them giggle, running towards a ladder going up.
    EXT. FROGAIA STREETS-DAY
    The street above is still dirty as carts and people move
    through, and the sewer twins don’t stick out too much.
    The city guards do stick out though, their teal armor
    glimmering in the sun. A handful drift between streets.
    Rat stares at the soldiers as Wilbur examines the wares on
    the street.
    Wilbur gets Rat’s attention and points at a barrel next to a
    food stand. They both grin and share a nod.
    Splitting up, Wilbur gets into position to snatch the barrel.
    Rat takes off in the other direction, close to some guards.

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  2. 2.
    Spotting someone buying an apple, Rat smirks deviously. The
    person takes a step away from the vendor and nearly takes a
    bite from the apple when Rat cries out.
    RAT
    WAAAAH! Give it back! No fair!
    The person pauses, staring at Rat confused. Two guards are
    stirred by the outcry and approach.
    GUARDS
    What’s the matter?
    Rat turns to the guards with a pathetic, quivering face on
    the verge of tears. They shakily point at the apple.
    RAT
    Took my apple! No fair, NO FAIR!
    The man looks between the guards and Rat stunned.
    APPLE MAN
    Woah hey! I just bought this!
    At the other end of the street, Wilbur watches attention
    shift to Rat and snakes the barrel out of sight.
    Rat sees Wilbur disappear out of the corner of their eye.
    The apple man brings the two guards back to the vendor, and
    Rat stalks back into the shadows.
    The apple vendor cranes her neck to get a look at Rat.
    VENDOR
    It’s that one street rat!
    One guard dashes straight for Rat who breaks into a full
    sprint down a crowded alley.
    The guard easily catches Rat, grabbing them by the back of
    their tunic and hoisting them off the ground.
    The second guard catches up.
    GUARD 2
    Seriously? Why bother with the kid?
    GUARD 1
    Annoying street rats are exactly
    what the barracks were asking for
    right? Royal decree and everything.
    Rat struggles against the guard’s grip fruitlessly.
    2.

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  3. 3.
    GUARD 2
    The barracks will crush the little
    thing! It can’t even throw a punch.
    GUARD 1
    Not my problem, just have to get
    the urchins off the streets.
    The two guards drag a struggling Rat away as Wilbur below
    pulls the stolen barrel into their little camp.
    WILBUR
    Yummies for all!
    Wilbur puts his arms in the air in celebration to silence.
    Wilbur quickly looks around the camp to find no sibling.
    WILBUR (CONT’D)
    No no no!
    INT. CASTLE BARRACKS-NIGHT
    Rat is lead through immaculate stone halls by an man with
    more impressive armor than the street guards.
    Rat’s face quivers as their gaze stays fixated on the walls.
    The older man opens a door to a large room filled with bunk
    beds. Rat stumbles into the room, amazed at the space.
    A bunch of kids and teens peek out from the beds to get a
    look at the newcomer.
    Rat breathes heavily in panic, pressing themselves against
    the door, finding it locked as the others approach them.
    INT. OLD SEWERS-NIGHT
    Wilbur sprints through older tunnels of the sewers. He jumps
    up to whatever viewports he can find to the streets above.
    Stumbling blindly through the tunnels, he pauses at a strange
    light further down.
    Cautiously, he peeks past a corner to see the altar past a
    broken down wall.
    Wilbur climbs up into the old worship space, a tall statue
    casts a shadow over the other half of the hall.
    3.

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  4. 4.
    Wilbur stares up at the strange creature depicted, once he
    stands at the front of the statue he glares at the face.
    STATUE
    Monke.
    Wilbur takes a step away from the statue, scared.
    WILBUR
    W-what?
    STATUE
    Know my name child. Monke, the one
    you return to.
    WILBUR
    Can you help me?
    STATUE
    I so love drama, do explain.
    WILBUR
    My twin... the shinies have stolen
    them to a place I can’t help them.
    STATUE
    That’s easy, power against those
    who wrong you is a simple gift.
    WILBUR
    Really?! You can-
    STATUE
    Simple is not something I enjoy. If
    you desire a gift, then I want
    entertainment.
    WILBUR
    How do I do that then?
    STATUE
    How much do you value your sanity?
    Wilbur glances away from the statue, thinking.
    WILBUR
    Don’t think I use it that much?
    STATUE
    Fantastic news. The power I offer
    will come at the cost of your moral
    mind, your kind never needed it
    anyways. Do you accept?
    4.

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  5. 5.
    A small stream of mist extends from the statue in the form of
    a hand, shimmering in rainbow tones.
    WILBUR
    I just need my sibling back,
    whatever I need to do.
    STATUE
    That’s the spirit! Let chaos reign!
    Rainbow tinted mist pours from the statue as it giggles. The
    mist coalesces into a form similar to the statue.
    The figure swirls around Wilbur and the color of his eyes
    shift to reflect the rainbow coloration. He clutches his
    head.
    INT. CASTLE BARRACKS-DAY
    The group of teens come back into the barracks, all exhausted
    from training still wearing the thin cloth armor.
    Rat falls into one the bunks, not bothering to change out of
    muddy clothes.
    RAT
    How does EVERYTHING hurt at once?
    Some of the others giggle at the exclamation.
    ORPHAN
    It’s better than the orphanage,
    well at least the beds, the work is
    about even ugh.
    The children murmur in agreement, Rat sits up from their bunk
    RAT
    I’m not from an orphanage.
    ORPHAN
    Oh, no wonder you smell like a rat.
    Rat gives the orphan a blank stare before glancing back at
    the bunk, pulling the soft bedding between their rough hands.
    RAT
    I’m.. going to get changed.
    The other orphans turn to their own chatter as Rat leaves the
    room. Walking down the hall, they start undoing the armor.
    5.

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  6. 6.
    INT. CASTLE WASHROOM-DAY
    The washroom has plenty of hooks to hang up the uniform cloth
    armor, and an intricate setup of simple mechanics for a early
    form of running water in the large basins in the room.
    Rat hangs their armor up before cautiously approaching the
    water basin. Curious, they fiddle with some of the knobs.
    Rat scrambles back as their efforts cause the water to spout
    forth. Amazed, Rat runs their hand under the water stream.
    Watching the grime wash off their hand, Rat quickly washes
    the rest of their arms.
    Shaking themself dry, they poke at the knobs bewildered.
    Unnoticed by Rat, a few bricks in the wall behind them slip
    out. Wilbur peeks through the hole he’s made.
    His face brightens as he sees Rat but he has to duck out of
    view when the other orphans come into the room.
    ORPHAN
    Aye! Rat, how’d you get the water
    on?
    After putting their armor up the orphans crowd around the
    basin excited.
    Rat looks at the other orphans confused before pointing at
    themself.
    RAT
    Me?
    ORPHAN
    Yes you, I think it’s pretty
    fitting anyways.
    RAT
    Haha... sure.
    The other orphans pass Rat to splash in the water, but Rat
    still stands separate than them.
    Wilbur glances around the space behind the wall and rushes
    off.
    Rat crosses their arms and leaves the washroom, gaze distant.
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  7. 7.
    INT. CASTLE HALLS-DAY
    As Rat walks through the halls, a strange fire of shifting
    rainbow colors catches their attention.
    Rat approaches the fire and it zips away down the hall, Rat
    instantly going to chase it.
    The fire only leaves Rat’s view when it escapes through a
    strange opening in the castle wall.
    INT. SECRET TUNNEL-DAY
    The rainbow flame jumps into Wilbur’s hand and flickers out,
    leaving the crumbling stone space dark.
    Rat cautiously steps into the old stonework tunnel, hand
    extended to touch the wall as they walk forward.
    WILBUR
    Boo!
    RAT
    AAAAA! Wilbur?!
    Wilbur wraps Rat into a tight hug, they embrace for a moment.
    RAT (CONT’D)
    How did you find this place? How
    did you get here? Was the fire you?
    WILBUR
    It doesn’t matter now! We can go
    back and leave the shinies behind!
    Wilbur puts Rat’s book into their hands. Rat stares at the
    title, words they can’t read. Not yet.
    RAT
    What happened Wilbur?
    WILBUR
    I got help! I received a gift that
    would let me save you, Monke helped
    Wilbur confidently takes a step away from the hole in the
    wall, holding onto Rat’s arm. He pauses when Rat doesn’t move
    RAT
    Wilbur... maybe we could stay?
    WILBUR
    What?! They stole you!
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  8. 8.
    RAT
    What’s there to go back to? Maybe
    we can work together to make a life
    here! Just wait until you-
    WILBUR
    I don’t care about any of that! I
    want you, I just need my twin.
    RAT
    Don’t worry! We’re always gonna be
    twins, let’s at least try. This
    could be our only chance at this.
    WILBUR
    I don’t like it. I don’t belong
    here anyways, their types wouldn’t
    like me at all.
    RAT
    You can stay in the tunnels! It’ll
    be our secret base and I’ll sneak
    you all sorts of stuff and we can
    hang out here in whenever! We’ll
    watch each other’s back.
    WILBUR
    Like we always do...
    RAT
    Yeah! Somewhere here... there’s a
    way to read the book, so much more
    we don’t understand. Maybe...
    Rat turns to Wilbur with a wide smile, clutching their book.
    Wilbur’s face brightens to match Rat’s smile. After a pause
    they hug again and Rat exits back into the castle halls.
    8.

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