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me to write a draft based on the outline I provided? ` ` ` ## Background & Motivation - ( 略 ) ## Research Problem & Hypothesis - ( 略 ) ## Approach - ( 略 ) ## Results - ( 略 ) ` ` ` ( タイトル ) ### Background The urgency to run computations on supercomputers is magnifying, not just for scientific endeavors but also for executing artificial intelligence applications. Yet, as we enhance computing capabilities, the shadow of carbon emissions grows larger. Given the scale and power consumption of supercomputers, these emissions are substantial. ### Motivation Sustainable development in the supercomputer sector demands three criteria: the continuous fulfillment of rising computational needs, adherence to power constraints, and minimization of the carbon footprint. The prevailing model, where supercomputers operate with a constant peak performance over 5-10 years, can be re-envisioned. Performance improvements often rely on more energy-efficient hardware, indicating a more frequent upgrade could unlock better efficiency and greater performance. ( 略 ) 本文に含めたい内容は自分が書く 箇条書きを文章化してもらう
recognized as a strategy for improving performance and energy efficiency in large-scale systems, the effects of these upgrades on supercomputers, especially concerning their carbon footprint, remain under-explored in existing literature. This gap in knowledge motivates our exploration in this work. ( 略 ) 論文執筆アシスタントの例:考えて指摘する 21 In the Motivation section, I would like to add another point mentioning that ` the effect of hardware upgrades on supercomputer systems are not well known from existing literature, that's why we look into in this work` . How should I mention this point? For the Discussion section, I would like to first discuss the limitation (only considered compute node carbon footprint). Then, say that 'nevertheless, more study in the relationship between hardware upgrades and carbon footprint might possibly help us develop a more flexible hardware upgrade policy such that the system can better adapt to changing performance requirements'. ### Discussion Limitation: A prominent limitation of this study is its focus solely on the carbon footprint of the compute nodes. ( 略 ) Potential: Nevertheless, understanding the intricate relationship between hardware upgrades and carbon footprint, as presented in our research, offers a promising avenue. As we continue to delve deeper into this relationship, there's a potential to develop a more flexible hardware upgrade policy. ( 略 ) 追加したい点を伝えて書いてもらう 文章の順番を変えてもらう
下書きを元に書き直した内容 ) Motivation ( 下書きを元に書き直した内容 ) Research Problem ( 下書きを元に書き直した内容 ) Approach ( 下書きを元に書き直した内容 ) Results ( 下書きを元に書き直した内容 ) ``` Please provide any critical feedbacks after reading through it. Your revised sections are well-detailed and provide a comprehensive look into the study's focus, background, motivation, approach, results, and discussion. The flow of the content is coherent, and it transitions logically from one section to the next. The arguments and findings presented are also clear and informative. However, I'll provide a few suggestions to further refine your text: 1. Background: - ( フィードバック ) 2. Motivation: - ( フィードバック ) 3. Approach: - ( フィードバック ) 4. Results: - ( フィードバック ) Overall, these are minor refinements to enhance clarity and readability. Your sections are already well-structured and thorough! 論文執筆アシスタントの例:指摘されて考える ユーザーを褒める傾向があるので、 ネガティブなフィードバックだけを読む 書き直してからフィードバックをもらう