times to those of her male counterparts. CLUNKY A recent article, in the Chicago Tribune, compared Ledecky’s times to those of her male counterparts (http://www.chicagotribune.com/sports/chi-katie-ledecky-meets-mens- qualifying-standards-for-2016-olympic-trials-20140922-story.html). Example 1
the Olympics and 15 in the world championships. That haul is the most ever by a female swimmer. For details, check out her Wikipedia entry. CLUNKY Katie Ledecky has won 20 gold medals: Five in the Olympics and 15 in the world championships. That haul is the most ever by a female swimmer. For details, click here. Example 4
world today. Want proof? Read this news article in the Washington Post, this analysis in SwimSwam, and this op-ed in Swimming World. CLUNKY Katie Ledecky is considered the greatest athlete in the world today. Want proof? Read this article, this one, and this one. Example 5
2020, which presents the results of a study about students’ use of laptops in the classroom. INCOMPLETE A scholarly article about laptop use. Example 1
which declares that American Giant makes the “greatest hoodies ever.” INCOMPLETE This Slate article, by Farhad Manjoo, about American Giant hoodies. Example 3